Comments | lifesexpression: chapter 2: the line between reality and fantasy

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chapter 2: the line between reality and fantasy

Jan 03, 2009 22:11

Author : mariegina
Rating : NC-17
Disclaimer : I ain't some old frail man who loves weird looking costumes x3
Warnings : Weird, random stuff. Might be gory for upcoming chapters.
Dedications : ♥catslove17♥ eightroses♥
Prequel
Chapter 1

( He watches as more blood trickles out and he starts to pull along the handle, red spots staining the white carpet beneath his feet. They form a pattern and Tegoshi wonders if he should do something about it.

Too late.

He lifts his head and his hand stops in midair. It is as that very moment when everyone else walks back into the room and stands still, stunned. He simply looks up at them and smiles. And then he speaks.

(Ne, how does it look? It’s pretty, isn’t it?) )

char : tegoshi

Comments 19

animetb28 January 3 2009, 15:47:33 UTC

first first??
wow...i was shocked at the ending...omg...poor poor massu...what will happen to tegoshi i wonder...
anyway...
very nice fic...
thank you ne..
good job!!

mariegina January 4 2009, 04:58:35 UTC

lol I think... so? or not? =/ uhm. Make sure you've read it from the prequel cause it all connects =D ♥ thanks for the comment

eightroses January 4 2009, 01:11:37 UTC

YOU KNOW WHAT I DID WHEN I SAW THIS?
I GOT TEARS IN MY EYES BECAUSE I KNEW THAT IS WAS GOING TO KILL ME AGAIN ;w;
MASUUUUDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ;w;

but hey you really changed it from before ne
it makes more sense now xD

mariegina January 4 2009, 04:55:04 UTC

YES. I KNOW, BUT EVEN AFTER KNOWING THE STORY YOU STILL CRIED? OH YOU MASSU LOVER.

<3 I had to. The draft was so rough and.. so... weird. XD

eightroses January 4 2009, 04:57:15 UTC

ITS NOT A CRIME YOU KNOW, TO LIKE MASUDA, HE'S CUTE :3

yea, it seems more clean now :]

mariegina January 4 2009, 04:59:43 UTC

LOL. OKAY. BUT HES SO NOT CUTE NOW. LOOKIE THE HAIR ;;A;; *horror*

My fics go through various processes to come out clean looking. xD

Thread 5

trivialaffair January 4 2009, 05:05:59 UTC

D: Why.

mariegina January 4 2009, 05:06:57 UTC

D= because it makes sense!!

catslove17 January 6 2009, 14:00:24 UTC

A dedication. YAY!!!! I love those, and it's about as close as someone will ever come to saying "We're going to name our baby after you!"

And because you know that I have a problem with who's on top, I would like to thank you for making it clear in this fic. And my my massu, someone's got real dark fantasies there.

First, tops to the bolded, underlined and italicized words. Especially naked. How did you know I like that word most of all?

Although this sounds cliche, I think the first paragraph + line are the best.
He watches as more blood trickles out and he starts to pull along the handle, red spots staining the white carpet beneath his feet. They form a pattern and Tegoshi wonders if he should do something about it.

Too late. Even though too late, is just two words, I find that it captures so much meaning, not just in this little prolouge, but in the whole master orchestra of your series ( ... )

mariegina January 6 2009, 14:04:17 UTC

haha, IF I have a baby XD

lol, massu's dead =(

lol oh you dirty woman >D dirty minded cat,

AND YOU KNOW WHAT. THATS MY FAVOURITE PHRASE TOOO <3333

yes donuts. i think its supposed to be nikuman = meatbun though. people say im evil for killing massu

(IKR! i have plenty where that came from)

brown_cinnamon January 8 2009, 14:56:49 UTC

oh my gosh...
I still couldn't get the picture perfectly, though I have some deductions.
And massu, a victim..
Ah well, can't wait for your next update...^^

mariegina January 8 2009, 16:52:13 UTC

hmm, i think im blatantly obvious.