[Oneshot] 5 & 1/2 Minute Hallway - Part 3/3

May 26, 2009 01:37

Title: 5 & 1/2 Minute Hallway (Part 3/3)
Genre: AU
Pairing: Jun/Sho
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Absence sharpens love, presence strengthens it. ~ Thomas Fuller

Notes: This story is dedicated to catacombkid, because it would not have happened without her. She'll argue the point, but she's totally wrong. >.> Seriously, thank you sooooo much! ♥♥♥♥ Loads of thank to ( Read more... )

*srs!fic, *angst, g: arashi, *au, #oneshot, p: jun/sho

Leave a comment

Comments 98

catacombkid May 26 2009, 08:16:25 UTC
Honey! Honey! I can't say enough how much I love the fic. I know that you've probably heard me talk about it more than you'd like but honestly, I think it's brilliant! And I adore the way that you wrote it. From the beginning to the end, even though I was reading all the difference scenes as you wrote them, I'm still amazed at how you've managed to sew it all together.

Just... ugh! Everytime I read it, I can't help but cry a little. IT IS THAT GOOD! I know we talked a lot about the little details of things and I love how you just left some things out for the reader to interpret instead of stating it plainly. I love how all the characters are connected and how it still feels like it's Arashi even though it's AU. I just... love love love love love this!!!

I hope that you'll get lots of lovely comments from this fic, because seriously, you deserve it! *showers you with love*

Reply

catacombkid May 26 2009, 08:21:05 UTC
And honestly, I don't think anyone else could've written this fic aside from you. ♥♥♥♥♥

Reply

lifeinthebox May 26 2009, 08:23:03 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwww. ;o; You flatter me too much. Seriously!

Reply

catacombkid May 26 2009, 08:27:59 UTC
I only say it because it's true! This is seriously one of the most poignant pieces of fiction I've ever read. Honestly, I don't even care that it's fanfiction. It's a lot better than a lot of the published works I've read. Honey, you're oh so very talented and I just can't thank you enough for indulging me by writing this. *rolls*

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

lifeinthebox May 26 2009, 08:47:51 UTC
Auuugh... between you and Yume, I will never stop blushing. Seriously, you guys have been so awesome the whole time I was writing this and now your comments are so awesome and just... augh. *flails* ;O;

Seriously, it means so much knowing you liked it, because you know how much I love your fic and how insanely talented I think you are. The fact that you're also down with the ghost stories and the genre in general only makes it mean that much more! ♥♥♥

And sorry again about making you cry. Just consider this your incentive to get me back with your current project. >.>

Augh, seriously, thank you so much for the comment. And thank you for being so awesome. *rolls~~*

That's okay. I have no Sakumoto icon on this journal or my regular one. XD *sadface*

Reply

(The comment has been removed)

lifeinthebox May 26 2009, 09:11:41 UTC
*embraces grudgingly* ;o; Damn yoooooou.

THAT IS JUST HOW I ROLL. NOW YOU MUST LEARN TO EMBRACE IT! 80 *RETURN NOOGIES* Oh man, I'm glad. XD I have to say, everytime I think of ghost stories I think of you, bb!

Awhn. Again with the flattery! D: And the fishy project is going to be marvelous. I am sure of it. 8| *pumps fist*

*ROLLROLLROLL* TL;DR FOR LIFE! &heart;♥♥

I kind of need to jazz up the icons on here, so I might not be entirely opposed to that... >.>

Reply


mitsuchan May 26 2009, 09:59:18 UTC
hadgasghh!! I told you as much on aim but this is seriously the first time fanfic has made me SNIFFLY. o__o

see, when I started reading I thought, "oh no, I can tell from the time-line switching they break up! sad!" and then you punched me in the face with THAT. I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE. D:

you're a jerk ;o; ♥

I loved this, though, seriously. You did a really great job of illustrating their everyday, mundane kind of happiness together in a totally plausible relationship that didn't reek of sap or cheese.

And ohno is awesome. :Db

I'm just gonna go cry now ;o;

Reply

lifeinthebox May 26 2009, 10:02:33 UTC
*hands you kleenex* I'M SORRY FOR YOUR TEARS AND ILU BB! ;o;

I'm a jerk but you love me, right? >.> *is punched*

Ahhhh, I'm glad you thought so!! That makes me seriously happy. ;___; And I'm glad you liked it eventhough I sucker punched you with the angst. I'M SORRY. LIKE I SAID, SHO MADE ME DO IT. 8|

Ohno is a bad ass mo fo. Everyone should realize this. :Db

Reply


xo_mishh_ox May 26 2009, 11:12:43 UTC
D': poor jun!! I LOVE this fic!!! The ending was sad but beautiful <3

Write more sakumoto! :)

Reply

lifeinthebox May 26 2009, 20:58:35 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥

I never really shipped them before this fic, but they've definitely grown on me! I may have to write them again sometime. ^^

Reply


gemplee May 26 2009, 14:14:36 UTC
i cried a little towards the end when jun visited sho for the last time, couldn't help myself. jun as a ghost wasn't a surprise but nino...that was a surprise tho i did wonder initially.

thank you for the fic.

Reply

lifeinthebox May 26 2009, 20:59:51 UTC
Ah, sorry for making you cry! I'm glad you enjoyed it, though and that Nino was a surprise, too. ^_~

Thanks for reading!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up