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lifeinthebox

[Oneshot] Inches and Falling

Mar 16, 2009 14:18

Title: Inches and Falling ( Read more... )

d: yoiko no mikata, #oneshot, p: odd pairings, p: kenta/taiyou, !finished, d: uta no oniisan, *crossover

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lifeinthebox March 20 2009, 07:16:04 UTC

Thanks so much! It's a relief to hear that the crossover setup seemed to work. I wanted it to be believable! (Well, mostly...)

Thanks again for reading! ♥

saturnianlove April 9 2009, 21:35:02 UTC

This was just great. I think your characterizations were just spot-on; I was laughing to myself at a lot of Kenta's actions thinking "of course. That's totally him." I've only seen one episode of Yoiko no Mikata, but I thought Taiyou-sensei was writeen well too! He's seem like an "idiot teacher" indeed xD

The flow of this was really great; and the interactions with Sakura and all were very nice touches. I agree with the first comment that this was easy to read! I was surprised that it was so long (initially I assumed it'd just be a "haha" type run-in or something) but I really enjoyed reading it to the end.

I'm just not good at this... homo stuff."
I liked this too xD Totally Kenta.

lifeinthebox April 14 2009, 16:26:35 UTC

Thank you so much! ♥ I'm glad Kenta came across in character. I wanted to main his loveable assholishness. 8D;

(I also highly recommend watching Yoiko no Mikata. It's worth it just to see Taiyou cry in every sing episode.)

It wasn't actually meant to be this long, but it kind of just ran away with me. I'm glad you thought it was still easy to read even with the length, though! :D

snoozing_kitten April 10 2009, 02:57:17 UTC

Awwww, that was adorable and absolutly perfect! Thank you.

lifeinthebox April 14 2009, 16:27:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :3

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lifeinthebox April 14 2009, 16:27:47 UTC

Haha... thanks! :D ♥

daisuki_dkzen May 28 2009, 20:00:48 UTC

oh gawd!! that was filled with so much awesomeness...i need a moment to flail.

lol!

but seriously! this was so well written, i felt like i was actually watching an episode of Uta. so much win!! oh gawd, i love it!

what i thought was funny was the fact that i totally didnt expect Taiyo to be the one making the first move and Kenta running off. haha, i dont know why, but it worked! oh man did it work good!

thank you so much for writing this awesomeness!!

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lifeinthebox May 28 2009, 22:44:11 UTC

Thanks! :D ♥

Haha... yeah, kenta is a little more blunt than Taiyou. But Taiyou is more in touch with his feelings? ;)

daisuki_dkzen May 29 2009, 04:53:21 UTC

Ahh, thats true, right? Taiyo is more prone to taking action for something once he's decided on it. Whereas, Kenta will run to the ends of the earth to avoid doing something unpleasant. LOL.

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