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nicefinalbeam March 17 2009, 19:58:59 UTC
This was brilliant. So well-written and completely... believable. ♥

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lifeinthebox March 20 2009, 06:58:54 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad it came across as believable... I was really worried about that aspect of it (she says, while writing a completely bizarre drama crossover with no basis in reality whatsoever XD;).

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silentchord March 17 2009, 22:52:28 UTC
hfjfldslsja ♥ You just made my day. I was so hoping someone would write this prompt *__*

Drama crossovers are always so hard to make believable, but this flows so perfectly. So easily could these two characters meet in the world you've created for them. Spot on. Brilliant.

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lifeinthebox March 20 2009, 07:00:46 UTC
Thank you!! I'm really flattered! ♥

And I'm glad that the pair together actually made sense-- I didn't want it to come across as two characters being randomly thrown together (even if, well, they kind of were. XD). I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

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samiraisfan March 17 2009, 23:20:26 UTC
So... whachamacallit... perfect!!!

Yes, it's really good and while I was reading it I was imaginin' the dorama's Taiyou next to Kenta, that difference of ages between them... I can't imagine the Taiyou of nowdays coz it's a bit difficult but your fic... really awesome!!!

Thank you for writting such a great work!
It's the second fic I read about these two and, I think, it's a bit difficult see them share their love. We need to see more Samirai--... etto, gomen>///< --... more ( ^^)Yama-pair(^^ )!!!

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lifeinthebox March 20 2009, 07:02:21 UTC
Thanks!! ♥

Haha... I never actually decided if this would be present day Taiyou or what. I kind of pictured him being a few years older but I'm really not sure-- imagining an older Taiyou really is kind of brain breaking.

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^_^

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kegom March 17 2009, 23:25:15 UTC
This was absolutely adorable! *________*

And you did a great job capturing each of their voices! While reading it, I never once thought of them as "Sho" and "Ohno" - they were "Taiyou" and "Kenta" the whole way through for me. (I even wanted to give Kenta a good whap on the head for ignoring Taiyou for so long. ;P)

And trust Kenta to be so blunt at the end. XD

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lifeinthebox March 20 2009, 07:04:48 UTC
Thanks!!!

Ah, thanks for saying so! I'm glad they seemed like that to you-- I was a bit afraid I'd slip up and they'd end up being more Sho and Ohno than Kenta and Taiyou. (And oh, man, you and me both. But somehow Kenta is kind of lovable as an asshole? Taiyou seems to think so anyway. Haha. 8D;)

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labeledlikeme March 18 2009, 06:56:22 UTC
wow this was longer than I expected ^_^ but it was really good!

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lifeinthebox March 20 2009, 07:05:32 UTC
Thanks! ♥ And I meant to put a word count when I posted to arashirabu and I forgot. Sorry! ^^;

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