... I can't believe how fast this is going. WTH. XD; (Not that I'm complaining, mind you.)
Throwing this up here for
coldbloodedfire. Still looking it over, though, so there may be a few minor changes as I beta it. DONE! 8D
(Also, I kind of had way too much fun writing the last scene. 8D;)
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Somewhere across the wall a king was dying. )
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The Kanjani parts filled me with so much glee. Oh bloodthirsty K8. Like, I knew it was coming but it still made me giggle and squeal. Also, poor Maru. XD XD
Not to mention the thought of going that long without soap made a small part of him recoil in horror.
I love you so much for this line alone. ♥ ♥ ♥ The little details fill me with glee.
ALSO OHNO. AND AIBA IS A SQUIRREL. SO IS JUN, BUT OH GOD AIBA IS A SQUIRREL. ♥ ♥ ♥ AND "THE STAR" BEING FOUL MOUTHED. JUST SDLKJS:LJF:DLKJFAKL!!
KEEP WRITING MORE, YOU. 8| *srs face*
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I'm glad you actually liked the K8 parts! I was a little worried since you knew it was coming. XDD And yes, poor Maru. He totally got the shaft. XD
*cough* I couldn't not write something alluding to Massu's OCD clean freak nature. It just seemed wrong. 8|
Sadly I can see Aiba as a squirrel. And when I think of Aiba squirrel I for some reason picture Wart from 'The Sword in the Stone' bouncing around as a little red squirrel. Only, uh... spazzier. XDDD
And the star having a dirty mouth just seemed waaaay too fitting to resist.
I SHALL. LET US PRAY TO THE TEGOD THIS BURST OF CREATIVITY LASTS!!!
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Technically I know (more or less) how everything is going to pan out, what with having read the book and talked to you about it a lot. But seeing how you let it all unfold makes it remain enjoyable. I've said it before, but I really enjoy your quirky writing style, you. :3 ♥
And it makes me so happy! I just imagined Massu realizing that oh god a bug might have crawled on me while I was sleeping unclean unclean unclean!!!! and I couldn't stop giggling. XD
AIBA WOULD TOTALLY BE A DISNEY SQUIRREL. Though I was seeing them more as a Chipp and Dale kind of thing. XD Still, Aiba the Squirrel is far too easy to imagine. Not to mention priceless.
Bitchy star = ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ I AM SO EXCITED RIGHT NOW. *flails at you some more!!*
I MOST CERTAINLY WILL. HELL, YOU CAN USE MY SHARE OF CREATIVITY, AS I'M CERTAINLY NOT DOING ANYTHING WITH IT. XD
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LOL at the kanjani8 part
their father is so cool!!
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Poor Massu...no soap for him...but I have a feeling that's going to be the least of his worries pretty soon...XD
And I have no words for the Arashi squirrels...so I guess I'll just have to...KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! SO CUTE!!!
So yeah...this was awesome! Thanks for updating!
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And the Arashi squirrels... well, I really couldn't exist. Aiba as a Disney squirrel is just about the cutest though ever. XD
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hope you'd update soon ^^
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