Title: You Say Goodbye, I Say Hello
Rating: Green Cortina (mild violence)
Word Count: 2,383
Notes: Happy very belated birthday
rebelxxwaltz, I am so so sorry this is so late!! I hope you had the most awesome day <3333
Summary: Gene's missing something dear to him.
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This is SO DELIGHTFUL. I love it I love it I love it.
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I'm so so glad you enjoyed it! Really sorry for not saying thank you sooner, but thank you enormously for reading and commenting and I'm glad you like itttttt <3333333333333333333
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The mere thought of Annie having the nerve to steal Gene's Garibaldis just goes to show how brave she actually is, and I think Gene ends up being a bit impressed in spite of himself. I might flip out if someone took my Garibaldis, too, those delicious biscuits (my faves) are super rare around these parts!
As is usual with your writing, the dialogue really shines and is so true to the characters from Gene's grousing to Sam's righteous indignation concerning his pudding. I can easily imagine Annie concealing her troubles in such a way, wanting to appear strong and not be viewed as the weak link in CID. Got to give Gene credit, because he seems to recognize in the end that she may just be stronger than the rest.
Also, the line about getting "all emotional over hoops on toast" was perfect.
Thank you so much for this lovely birthday gift, it's fantastic! <3333
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