Ficathon 2013: In My Head, Sam/Gene, White Cortina, by little_cello

[little_cello]

Title: In My Head
Author: little_cello
Rating: White Cortina
Characters/Pairing: Sam/Gene
Word Count: 2000 and a bit beyond (OpenOffice says it's 2282, but due to its habit of counting speech marks as words, I'd say it's a good hundred below that count)
Prompt: "Sam/Gene; drunk!fic; up to Brown Cortina. What do they say to each other? May be serious or comedic

Comments

[aisforinterval]

AJHDVFSKMADLFDN THE LAST SLEEPY EXCHANGE BETWEEN THE TWO KILLED ME, I AM SCREAMING, MY PRECIOUS BABIIIIIEEEEESSSS

This was very enjoyable~<3 I can only wonder what they'll think when they wake up the next morning. xD

"...Tyler, where's your hand?"

"Between two pillows."

"...THOSE AREN'T PILLOWS"

-shot-

But yes, you did a marvelous job of writing them as being TOTALLY SLOSHED. The drunken arguing and banter was quite lovely~ And you kinda nailed me with timey-wimey/fish out of temporal water feels too, which his contemplation of it being in his head. Also, nice take on doing it from Gene's POV! Great job, luv! :D

[little_cello]

Awwwwwwww Aima <33333333333 So glad you enjoyed it!!

HAHAHAHAH OH GOD, MENTAL IMAGES XDDDDDDDDD <333333333333

Thanks! :D For some reason I find it very easy and enjoyable to write drunk!fic. XD Which does NOT mean that I'm sloshed myself on a regular basis! (I write whump fic too and I don't get stabbed on a regular basis. just saying. XD) But yeah, it's fun. <3333 And hah, did I! XD Well, you can thank the Sunday chat for that, because the first line was entirely their doing, which brought the whole "it's in my head" into the fic in the first place. XDDD
Thank youuu~ <3333

[fern_tree]

This is so good, Cellooooooooooo <33333333333333333 IT'S SO CUTEEEEE <333333

The both of them are utterly adorable when drunk.... And together, just..... Awwwwwwww <3333333333 Sam getting all confrontational and inquisitive and asking Gene questions and just generally being a big drunk idiot <3333333

And then the ENDDDDDDDDDDDDD <33333333333333 Sam saying his mind makes up nice things too sometimes, and then that last 'good'....... <3333333333333 It's wonderfulllll <3333333333

[little_cello]

Awwwwwwwwwwww Fern, thank youuuuuuuuuu! <33333333333333333333333333

I love the image of drunk!Sam, we don't get enough of it in LoM XDDDD I'm really happy you like my version of him!

TEEHEE <333333333333 I was grinning to myself when I wrote that as well~ Thank yyyouuuuuuuuuuuuuu <3333333333333333

[rebelxxwaltz]

Drunken cuties, how I love them! <333333

[little_cello]

<3333333333 so glad you do!!

HAHAH OMG THAT BIT WITH RAY. Mental images Jesus Christ xDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Oh god indeed we did! The telepathy of great minds! /o/

Aaawwwwwwwwww Rebel :'DDDD It makes me so happy that you think I got Gene right! I'm still not quite sure with how I write him, but comments like yours really do encourage me. I shall definitely write more Gene's PoV then~ And to be honest, I AM quite proud of that little bit you quoted, heheh~

<33333333333 I enjoy drunk!Sam sooo much as well. I'm so happy you enjoyed my little fic! <333333

[debl_ns]

Cello, I was happy to see that you'd written for me again!♥ I read this the same day you posted ... and it was delightful and just how you'd described. I don't think you need to worry about your writing

[little_cello]

Aahhhh Debl :'DDD <33333333333333333333 I'm so very happy you enjoyed reading this!

Heheheh, it's getting easier for me to get into Gene's head! Of course, it's just my own view on him... But I think I've puzzled his behaviour out alright.

Yeahhh, Sam would be thinking about these things, wouldn't he. They're important to him, now that he's back in the 70s! :') <3333

<3 The final exchange was really lovely to write, so I'm very happy that people enjoy reading it as well.

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, and I'm truly happy you like this fic so much. <33333333333333

[anonyma73]

OMG, this is sooo cute!! Sleepy drunk Sam, and drunk as well Gene... wanting to ruffle his hair!!! And the "all in my head" thing... awwww!!

I absolutely love it! (And don't worry, it's slashy enough - for cute!fic. ;-))

[little_cello]

Thank you! <333333333333333333 Glad you liked it~