Oh, I really liked this a lot. Stories about Sam's childhood are a personal favourite of mine, and those first two scenes - not to mention the beautiful full-circle of the fifth - manage to reveal so much while keeping to a simple, understated child's voice.
Re: #4: I want to punch PC Miller in the face. Just so y'know ;)
Think this is a great concept and works really well. Like other commentators I like how it comes full circle. I also think that showing how Sam felt ignored a lot would explain a lot of his determined and confrontational attitude. : )
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Re: #4: I want to punch PC Miller in the face. Just so y'know ;)
These were great, thank you!
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Thank you very much for your kind comment :D
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Awesome story and very true to Sam's character.
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Thank you for commenting!
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Yeah, that's what I love about Sam, he's so up front and confrontational but so isolated at the same time.
Thanks for commenting!
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