Fic: Broken Mirror

[wolfy_writing]

“Got one.”  Simmons jerked his thumb.  “He’s in the bedroom.  Alive like you said.”

Vic smiled.  “Good.”

“Don’t see the point if you’re only going to kill him anyway.”

Vic cuffed him sharply on the head.  “You don’t need to see the point.”  It was one of the rules of this game: don’t answer to minions.  The boss’s plan was the boss’s plan.

Comments

[dancesontrains]

eeeeeeeeeee *hides*

Seriously, that was good. Very good. Now I'm going to read babb_chronicles.

[wolfy_writing]

Thank you.

Er, you can come out now. She's gone.

[hpstrangelove]

That was really good. Not something I would have even thought of. Very well written.

[wolfy_writing]

Thanks. Not something I'd have expected myself to think of. But there it is.

[talcat]

Twisted but very, very good.

[wolfy_writing]

Thank you! Glad you like my twistedness.

[operafloozy]

Congratulations, you just managed to make the test card girl even creepier. I didn't know that was possible.

I'm glad that Vic was creeped out by the proceedings, too-it makes the fact he went through with them worse, and makes him seem a lot more human.

[wolfy_writing]

I didn't know that was possible, either.

Vic, from what I can tell, seems to have a very small number of firm and sincere moral convictions, and a lot of stuff he'll do to get what he wants. I'm weirdly fascinated by the prospect of him ignorantly doing something that genuinely does violate his moral standards because he's set them so low.

[liquorishflame]

*winces at Sam grinding the splinter* Is he even wearing shoes?

I'm really gobsmacked by this, really well written. I love all your stuff anyway *she said shamelessly* :)

Seeing what's inside Vic's head really sells it, as does Sam's thoughts in the aftermath. To think Sam let him, out of a misplaced sense of love and duty.

Test Card girl's mockery was horrible and very real, and Sam accusing her of cheating by using the mirror, amazing. :)

*crosses fingers for sequel*

[wolfy_writing]

I was picturing him with shoes on, yes. Although the image you present...

Thank you very much. I love hearing what people think of my stuff; it's really encouraging to know people read it.

I'm not really sure where I could go for a sequel. But thanks.