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Jun 17, 2005 14:45

In thanks to docfraiser8. Not what she'd hoped for, I'm sure, but the best I can do at the moment.

CJ/Toby/Andi drabble )

writing by me

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bexatious June 17 2005, 14:45:02 UTC
Okay, I loooove the imagery here! I love poor Toby being all kerfuffled and unhappy. Poor Toby *pets*

But I don't get the plot. As much as one can have a plot in a drabble that is. Am I missing something or am I stupid because work has sucked the brains from my head?

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lifeasanamazon June 17 2005, 14:52:43 UTC
Aaaah, well, you know... um, the plot. I kind of knew it was too vague.
Toby is getting rid of the house at last. Basically.

*hangs head in shame*

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bexatious June 17 2005, 14:57:42 UTC
Don't be ashamed my dear. Rereading it, it makes perfect sense. And it hurts even more. Poor, poor little Toby.

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lifeasanamazon June 17 2005, 15:23:29 UTC
Well, that's okay then! Thank you!

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ninefish June 17 2005, 17:10:56 UTC
Oh, wibble. Sad.House.Toby kills me every time.

Lovely!

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lifeasanamazon June 17 2005, 19:55:11 UTC
Thank you, my little love!

(You know I make such an effort to be nice about Andi because so many on my flist love her.)

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sweetly_savage June 17 2005, 17:54:22 UTC
First, I have to get the heen out of the way and tell you that I read it that CJ was stood in the shower. Can't tell you how much more sense it makes with the word "shadow".

Now, on with the important thing... I love this! (As you knew I would, I imagine.) I love his watch across town. And even though it's for the best and he's moving forward that he still hesitates. He does nothing without deep thought.

It's just lovely. Thank you!! Mwuh!

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lifeasanamazon June 17 2005, 19:56:12 UTC
Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen. The shower? The fucking shower!!

Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen all over again.

But thank you, baby! Mwuh back atcha.

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soaked_in_stars June 17 2005, 18:39:02 UTC
I love it. Love. Andy sounds so very Andy, and I just adore CJ in the background. Sigh. Lovely.

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lifeasanamazon June 17 2005, 19:57:33 UTC
You're too good to me and I could eat you all up.

Me? Drinking? Whatever makes you think that?

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docfraiser8 June 20 2005, 01:54:13 UTC
amazing. you own me.

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lifeasanamazon June 20 2005, 16:20:17 UTC
I'm so pleased that you like it!

Thank you! :D

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