If-Then

Nov 20, 2011 09:08

Title: If-Then
Fandom: Sherlock BBC
Pairing: Sherlock Holmes/John Watson
Rating: R
Word Count: 2164
Warning: Some code was harmed in the making of this fic
Summary: It's basic really.

IF (John's interested)
THEN
(kiss him)
ELSE
(smile faintly)
END IF
A.N: A million thanks to my betas: non_canonical and megh! <3

If-Then )

if-then, sherlock holmes/john watson, r, sherlock bbc

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artemis_gruu November 21 2011, 19:47:46 UTC
I love the style you've used here, Sherlock's brain being a big string of logic and references. It works very well, that contrast between mechanical function and the warmer, more emotional parts.

I think I may go read this again.

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lielabell November 22 2011, 17:41:40 UTC
*big happy grin* Thank you for the lovely compliment.

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Do not indicate annoyance at being interrupted while formulating controlled experiment. blythechild November 21 2011, 19:50:51 UTC
This was lovely. Framing the variables of love in yes or no propositions is novel, entertaining, and very much in keeping with Sherlock's social tone deafness.

God help John... ;)

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Re: Do not indicate annoyance at being interrupted while formulating controlled experiment. lielabell November 22 2011, 17:42:26 UTC
God help him indeed. But then, he has Sherlock, so it can't be too bad for him, right? :DDD

Glad you liked the fic.

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scarletrose1324 November 21 2011, 19:56:07 UTC
awww this is just sweet and brilliant - i like how you've worked sherlock's mind and the last little paragraph is just...awww [i wish i could come up with something better then awww!]

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lielabell November 22 2011, 17:43:14 UTC
Thank you! And "awwww!" is a perfectly lovely response. :)

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laurtew November 21 2011, 20:08:16 UTC
I absolutely love this. This is such a great way to see how Sherlock's mind works. And I love how it all ends. Perfect!

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lielabell November 22 2011, 17:43:33 UTC
Thank you! <3

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what_alchemy November 21 2011, 20:25:42 UTC
Best moment: "Sulk? y/n"

:D

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lielabell November 22 2011, 18:37:08 UTC
*grins* He's so much fun to write because he thinks such wonderful things.

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