Comments | licensetospill: Colour Blind

licensetospill

Jul 19, 2008 00:30

Title: Colour Blind

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Comments 5

trainmad July 18 2008, 17:00:25 UTC

Wow! Brilliant stuff, and I like the apprehension Stevie feels as he enters the bar.
=D

sophiamoon July 18 2008, 18:24:20 UTC

Glad you posted it. Great story.

afiqah_x14 July 18 2008, 22:19:03 UTC

Wow!! That was a good story.. :)

tessalonso July 19 2008, 10:20:10 UTC

This is great. I loved the image of the women left grasping, even though he didn't mean to do it.

I love the effect of the bar on Stevie.

fidelitii July 19 2008, 15:41:14 UTC