Feathers

Oct 24, 2005 19:46

Now I'm back to my normal self.
Today I felt good. It feels like a
bird who has just discovered
that he can fly even with
clipped wings.

Now I wonder if angels sometimes lose feathers...

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lynxyoukai October 25 2005, 23:43:37 UTC
very interesting poem. i love it...i am really bad at writing poems...that could make a really good story. that's all i can write skillfully. this is beautiful though...it invoked a real image in my mind...kinda wierd though. i saw an angelic being flying but then i saw his feathers falling off and him taking a nose dive toward earth...but he was happy.

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Poetry / Thoughts liccoricetree November 17 2005, 00:58:44 UTC
Actually you're seeing how weird my thoughts can be sometimes...this isn't a poem, just thinking aloud. I guess they can be the same though.

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