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[tenchi_saz]

Hi there this is my first post here, hopefully one of many. Let me know your thoughts and any advice would be great. Thanks!

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He squinted at the screen before him. The glare hurting his sleep deprived eyes as the cursor blinked tauntingly at him.

Comments

[anonymous]

i really like this! you captured the wee-hours nicely, right up to the internal debate over whether to expend the energy to get coffee. i could really feel the neutrality of his mood--too tired to care one way or another. nice done! : )

[abide97]

i really like this! you captured the wee-hours nicely, right up to the internal debate over whether to expend the energy to get coffee. i could really feel the neutrality of his mood--too tired to care one way or another. nice done! : )

[tenchi_saz]

Thank you very much. Glad you liked it!