Fic: Holding The Line

Aug 21, 2009 08:44

Title: Holding The Line
Fandom: Dollhouse
Pairing: Topher/Adelle (?)
Rating: R
Spoilers: Up to 1x12
Warnings: Character body death, body-stealing, issues of consent, technical genderswap.
Disclaimer: In no way mine or anything to do with me, I own nothing.
Summary: Adelle wakes up in the chair.
AN: 'Bodyswap' cliche, for cliche_bingo .
Holding The Line )

word count: 1500-3000, kink: consent issues, genre: slash, genre: het, rating: r, dollhouse, challenge: cliche bingo, theme: bodyswap/bodyshare, rated: adult, theme: death

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dimestore_romeo August 21 2009, 09:08:44 UTC
Ooh, I love this. I love how Adele is still a stone cold bitch and that she finds it difficult to deal with weakness. This is all very intriguing (especially the events that have led up to this point, and how it is going to turn out), and I hope you write more about the Dollhouse.

And I laughed so hard at the irony of her finding herself in Mr Dominic's body. The dialogue was perfect.

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entangled_now August 21 2009, 09:49:40 UTC
Thank you very much, I do love the fact that Adelle gives the impression she's always prepared to deal with consequences and just move on. I thought bodyswapping her would be the most fun, so I went all the way. I'm really pleased that it worked for you.

I did think that would be a fantastic irony, thank you :)

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entangled_now August 21 2009, 09:52:45 UTC
Why am I a cheater? Why?

You haven't truly made it until you need to be eliminated with extreme prejudice Y/N?

Topher is awesome, he needs to get to do more awesome things. Possibly in some sort of post-apocalyptic environment, geniuses aren't happy unless they can save the world under pressure!

Thank you! ♥

I cheat at stuff because I can get away with it, mwahahahaha.

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entangled_now August 21 2009, 13:33:39 UTC
AHHH, then yes, I am a dirty cheater :D I was actually trying to use the prompts in universes where they'd fit without feeling out of place. It's been kind of fun.

Who wants to be moderately dangerous! It's like being the spoon of the cutlery world, no one wants to be the spoon!

Topher as MacGyver is the my new favouritist 'show that will never exist.' I mourn for it.

I am! I am cute and harmless and I get away with things, see me getting away with things :D

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rawthorne August 21 2009, 11:50:29 UTC
I'm not a fan of genderswap fic and yet this time it not only made sense but it retained the things we love about Adelle. She wasn't Dominic, she was Adelle in a body not her own. I love how she retained her cool, no matter how unsettling the experience became.

Brilliant.

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entangled_now August 21 2009, 13:38:12 UTC
Thank you very much, I'm really glad the idea worked for you. Adelle really is fabulous in the way she doesn't buckle under pressure, I had to use her for the prompt.

Thank you for reading.

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entangled_now August 21 2009, 13:48:32 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm really pleased you liked it. I really enjoyed writing Adelle's voice so I'm glad she worked for you.

I agree, Topher is just awesome ♥

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otahyoni August 21 2009, 14:31:21 UTC
Oh, extremely interesting concept. You have her struggle to maintain control despite the panicked strangeness of the whole situation down perfectly. Very nicely done. :)

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entangled_now August 21 2009, 16:48:50 UTC
Thank you very much, I'm really pleased it worked for you, Adelle's need to be in control is so sharp, I definitely wanted to explore it.

Thank you for reading.

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