Fic: We Are Legion

[entangled_now]

Title: We Are Legion
Fandom: Primeval
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Death, dark themes.
Disclaimer: In no way mine or anything to do with me. I own nothing.
Summary: Some things should be left in time.
AN: 'Dark fic' cliche, for cliche_bingo .

Comments

[telperion_15]

Wow, this is deeply creepy and terrifying! Awesome job!

*hides from pod-person!Becker*

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much! I really wanted to do horrible things to the Primeval cast with my 'dark fic' prompt.

Pod-person Becker will get you- No, stop it! Bad Corona!

[talliw]

Well written. The dark eyes reminded me of the black oil of Xfiles which also was a life-form and took control of the infected person.
I'm a little curious why it chose Becker who was armed and therefore more of a treat as for instance Connor or Abby.

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much. Yes, it does have an old X-Files feel to it, so maybe I was channelling :D

I don't think it considered any of them a threat, I think it was just looking for someone it could use....

[nietie]

Meep! That was....... awesome!
It reminded me of the X-files too.
Wonderful fic!

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much! I'm really pleased that you liked it :)

[fredbassett]

*hides in ma basket*

That was a really creepy, scary, totally brilliant fic!

The last line was an absolute corker, and it worked particularly well coming from Becker!

Great stuff :)

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much! I really wanted it to be creepy so I'm really pleased you thought it was :D

I did think Becker would be the perfect mouthpiece for the black oil monster, though I must have fussed with the last line for about an hour!

I'm glad you liked it.

[knitekat]

Brilliantly creepy. That last line especially... I really don't hold out much hope for Danny, or for anyone else. Eep.

[entangled_now]

Why thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I suspect everyone is very much doomed, though I do feel bad for Danny, and Becker...poor Becker.