A Mask of Skin and Bone

Aug 31, 2012 09:20

Title: A Mask of Skin and Bone
Fandom: Teen Wolf
Pairing: Derek/Stiles
Rating: R
Warnings: Non-con, mind control
Spoilers: 2x06
Word Count: 2650
Disclaimer: In no way mine, or anything to do with me, I own nothing.
Summary: Stiles had christened him 'The Puppeteer.' Which had struck him as kind of amusing at the time.
AN: Written for the 'Telepathic Trauma ( Read more... )

teen wolf: derek/stiles, word count: 1500-3000, challenge: hc bingo, genre: slash, rated: adult, teen wolf, rating: r

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ravelqueen August 31 2012, 09:17:54 UTC
Why do you hate happiness! And why even is there a square called telepathic trauma, that's awful

(great fic, but brrr so creepy and unsettling, I know you are planning sequels for a bunch of the bingo fics you have written, is this on the list?)

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entangled_now August 31 2012, 10:14:15 UTC
I don't hate happiness, I swear. I don't even know, it's like a square someone made up so terrible, awful things could happen to people.

Thank you, I'm glad you thought it was creepy and unsettling. I honestly don't know which ones will get sequels until they do. Some of them I just find myself wanting to write what happens next.

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tryslora August 31 2012, 11:02:16 UTC
You are prolific. This makes me happy. :) I actually found two more of your fics in my list of bookmarked to-read fics, so obviously I have to start working my way backwards. But about this one... chilling. It reads like the after-effects of an episode, and you litter quick statements throughout (like the girl, Bethany) that let me fill in the happenings with my mind's eye. Exceedingly well done. I just feel for Stiles and shiver at Derek being reduced to all that guilt. Lovely & well done!

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entangled_now August 31 2012, 12:00:51 UTC
I do write a lot when I'm having a moment. But I try not to spam people too hard :)

Thank you very much. I'm pleased it felt like that, and I do like leaving things as hints and suggestions sometimes rather than making everything obvious and filling in all the holes, so I'm happy it worked for you.

Thank you for reading.

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miya_morana August 31 2012, 11:11:29 UTC
My heart, you broke it into tiny little pieces, you evil genius writer! D:

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entangled_now August 31 2012, 11:57:05 UTC
You're so kind to say such things, and I'm sorry, some of these h/c squares are definitely heavier on the hurt than the comfort.

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miya_morana August 31 2012, 12:33:04 UTC
That's okay, sometimes I like having my heart broken. Plus, I know you'll make it up at some point with some awkward date in the Milkshake series. ♥

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entangled_now August 31 2012, 12:43:15 UTC
But why, why do we like having our hearts broken?

The next part of the Milkshake series is finished and half edited. It's going up on Monday.

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sweetsyren August 31 2012, 11:30:11 UTC
Oh wow. Ouchie.

I would love to see more of the aftermath of this but it's sort of perfect as it is. Gorgeous and sharp and painful and desperate and all the good things. Lovely.

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entangled_now August 31 2012, 11:55:57 UTC
Thank you very much, I definitely wanted it to hurt a little, which sounds kind of bad...

I'm always struck by the urge to write the aftermath of horrible things. But I also like leaving them on some sort of grubby edge if they work like that too. I'm happy that it did work for you.

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xsnarkasaurus August 31 2012, 13:43:21 UTC
See, ou give me all this sugary, adorable fluffy, even when you're torturing poor Stiles, and then you do THIS. Augh. ihu. except for how I don't.

meanie.

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entangled_now August 31 2012, 14:31:25 UTC
I really do just want to write everything for them. Even things like this. I'm sorry! And you're absolutely allowed to hate me a little bit.

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