Voicing My Concerns

Aug 03, 2012 10:37

Title: Voicing My Concerns
Fandom: Teen Wolf
Rating: PG
Word Count: 750
Disclaimer: In no way mine, or anything to do with me, I own nothing.
Summary: "I can't believe you got us arrested."
AN: Written for the 'Falsely Imprisoned' square, for hc_bingo. I had a go at a dialogue-only story, because I've never done one of those.
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rating: pg, challenge: hc bingo, genre: gen, teen wolf, word count: 500-1500

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miya_morana August 3 2012, 09:55:18 UTC
Oh, Stiles, you are adorable. <3
Also, I now want to know how Derek ended up naked "in the general vicinity" of Stiles somewhere his dad saw them (I'm guessing Stiles' bedroom).
This was a lot of fun! :D

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entangled_now August 3 2012, 10:07:10 UTC
Stiles appreciates all of their adventures. I won't believe anything else!

I feel like I just want everything to happen with these two. But being naked in Stiles's bedroom wouldn't be 'public indecency,' surely? I'm thinking the woods. For reasons XD

I'm glad you liked it.

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miya_morana August 4 2012, 10:59:20 UTC
Of course he does! He would have found a way to cut himself from Derek if he didn't. :P

The woods aren't exactly public either. Maybe a dark alley somewhere? XD

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entangled_now August 4 2012, 11:32:05 UTC
Maybe the woods while there was some sort of 'event' happening in them? Ah, accidental public nudity!

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pyjamagurl August 3 2012, 10:31:55 UTC
This is really awesome! There is so little all-dialogue stuff out there and this is amazeballs!

I love their conversation, it had me giggling, and it is all so them in a lovely way xD

Oh Stiles... you get there eventually *pats*

I love that despite this being all dialogue I can totally picture their faces throughout!

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entangled_now August 3 2012, 11:17:41 UTC
Thank you! I see dialogue-only stories occasionally, and I know it's easy for them to be confusing. I'd never done one so I wanted to see if I could make one work. That makes me very happy.

I'm happy their conversation felt in character, I just love listening to them talk on the show so that means a lot to me ♥

I kept having to hammer out mistakes. I tend to read dialogue too fast when I'm editing and miss things, and this was all dialogue. lol. so hard.

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zilentdreamer August 3 2012, 11:00:30 UTC
This was awesome and so amazing I literally cannot stop chortling to myself. I have yet to find a writer that can capture Stiles' sheer....Stilesness the way you do. And Derek, with his 'serial killer eyes' god I am a fucking nuisance right now with all the laughing....

I just...I don't even have words.....

So good!!!!!

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entangled_now August 3 2012, 11:34:49 UTC
Thank you very much! I swear you stick these two together and fun things just happen. Their characters are just that good. I'm very pleased you thought I made Stiles work, his voice is beautifully insane so that makes me happy.

Thank you for reading.

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aliassmith August 3 2012, 12:09:26 UTC
why are you looking at me like I'm an idiot

STILES. YOUR LIFE.

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entangled_now August 3 2012, 17:00:47 UTC
IT'S JUST ONE ADVENTURE AFTER ANOTHER!

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morganoconner August 3 2012, 13:24:40 UTC
I giggled the entire way through this. Oh, boys. ♥

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entangled_now August 3 2012, 17:01:08 UTC
Thank you! I'm happy it made you laugh ♥

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