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Fic: Inside and Outside

Aug 25, 2009 13:29

Title: Inside and Outside
Fandom: Firefly
Characters: Mal, River
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: In no way mine, or anything to do with me, I own nothing.
Summary: He wasn't a man prone to wilful denial but he was pretty sure nothing good could come from having something buried inside your head. Or worse, something missing out of it.
AN: 'Mutation/Physical ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, word count: 1500-3000, genre: gen, firefly, challenge: cliche bingo

Comments 12

dmlpacker August 25 2009, 15:39:13 UTC

*stares*

*stares some more*

WHY DID THOSE BASTARDS HAVE TO CANCEL THIS GODSEND OF A SHOW?! Now this can never happen... *pouts*

(By the way, I feel like you captured River's voice perfectly .)

entangled_now August 26 2009, 08:07:04 UTC

Thank you! I really did love this little show and I'm sad that it didn't get to have big seasons full of lots of awesome stuff happening!

River is awesome so I'm especially glad she worked for you :)

pen_of_iron August 26 2009, 12:46:38 UTC

oooooo! that was pleasantly unpleasant! more plz?

entangled_now August 26 2009, 16:32:38 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm really glad the idea worked for you.

alcetis August 27 2009, 01:38:23 UTC

Oh... that's really interesting!
"That it wasn't so much the memory as the suggestion of a memory"
I love that line for no particular reason... :)
Very very spellbinding.

entangled_now August 27 2009, 08:52:46 UTC

Thank you very much, I'm really pleased it worked for you :)

harem_ent August 27 2009, 19:31:04 UTC

Oh noes. Crazyness abounds.

entangled_now August 27 2009, 19:48:25 UTC

Firefly crazy is one of my favourite types of crazy.

♥

demonqueen666 August 28 2009, 19:39:44 UTC

Jesus. Way to make me remember why I wish they never canceled this show.

You have a great handle on River here which in itself is commendable, but you also have just as good a grasp on Mal. He's harder to get right than some might at first think. But I could really hear his voice in this, particularly the introspection at the beginning.

Dark and creepy and strange, but still just in tone for the world of this show. Love it.

entangled_now August 29 2009, 07:10:54 UTC

The show had so much beautiful potential, oh the things he could have done with it!

Thank you very much, that's a really amazing compliment, and I agree with you, Mal is hard, he's more complicated and intelligent than he comes across, all the time, so I'm really pleased he worked for you.