Somebody's Watching, Somebody's Waiting - Part 14

Mar 24, 2010 17:31

Title: Somebody’s Watching, Somebody’s Waiting

Fandom: Criminal Minds

Pairing: Jennifer Jareau/Maggie Lowe

Disclaimer: Criminal Minds is property of CBS and I don’t own anything.

Rating: PG

Summary/Spoilers: This is a retelling of the episode ‘Somebody’s Watching’. The BAU team is on the hunt for a killer stalking an actress. Meanwhile Jennifer Jareau begins dating the actress’s best friend, unaware she’s the stalker they’re searching for. Yeah that’s right I just revealed the ending of the episode, but it’s not possible to write this story without revealing it anyway. Numerous story revelations are revealed.

A/N: This episode not only had two women I really like (A.J. Cook and Katheryn Winnick) together, but the first portrayal of gay characters on Criminal Minds, with Katheryn being one of them. It had so many things going for it, but instead it was disappointing. A.J. and Katheryn’s screen time was minimal, they never appeared onscreen together, and the gay portrayals were terrible. Ironically Maggie Lowe is probably still the best portrayed gay character on the series. So I decided to write this episode the way it should’ve gone. Oh and that “lesbian” crushing on Gideon earlier in the episode because he reminded her of her dad? That scene alone warrants her getting erased from the story.

A/N 2: Special thanks to my beta talos13

Part 14

Maggie’s car pulls up across the street from the Beverly Hotel. The blonde looks out the window and doesn’t see any of the FBI vehicles parked out front. The rest of the team must be off doing other things. She gets out of the vehicle, and makes her way to the intersection; towards the building.

*****

Inside the place, the blonde followed what Jennifer instructed and went to the front desk. No receptionist can be seen at first, but later the blonde notices him sorting something out from behind the desk. Maggie rings the front bell to get his attention.

The sound snaps him out of his activity. He stands up, “How long have you been standing there for?”

“Just arrived,” Maggie answers.

“Good,” he smiles. “So how may I help you?”

“There should be a spare key for room 507 waiting for me. It’s from a Jennifer Jareau.”

He turns around to the back shelf and pulls out the key from a small slot with a note in it. He takes a look at the name on the note, “You’re Maggie Lowe?” The woman nods. “Here’s you go ma’am,” he says in a welcoming manner as he hands the room key to her.

“Thanks,” the blonde takes it and heads for the elevators.

*****

The door to room 507 can be heard unlocking then silently begins to open. Maggie quietly slides into the room, and closes the door behind her. She glances around the place; a dimly lit hotel room with the only light source on is a lamp on the drawer beside the bed. Her girlfriend is dozed off on the bed. Out of her pant suits and business wear; down to a tank top and shorts. The amber coloured light illuminates her face and figure beautifully. Paper work is lying just beside her and on the drawer.

The blonde approaches Jennifer. She stares at her girlfriend and gently brushes away some hair that’s on her face. Maggie sets one hand down on the bed and leans in to kiss the other blonde. The interaction of the kiss wakes Jennifer up. She jumps back a bit, startled, until she is aware who it is.

“Hey, it’s just me,” Maggie tells her softly. “I thought you would have like being woken up with a kiss. Guess I was wrong.”

“No, don’t worry about it. I sometimes get startled,” Jennifer reassures her. “You know with the job and all. What time is it?” she turns to look at the digital clock.

“It’s 10,” Maggie answers.

The agent begins to collect the papers scattered in front of her. Maggie helps. She hands her pile to the press liaison, “Here.”

“Thanks sweetie,” Jennifer sets the papers on the drawer.

Maggie then starts to undress, removing her shirt first. “Now we can get on with this.” She unzips her jeans and slides them off. Her hand caresses her girlfriend’s leg before the blonde decides to climb onto the bed.

Jennifer lays and watches as Maggie; now down to her nice blue undergarments slides her hand underneath the hem of the top and strap of the agent’s bra. Maggie pokes her pinky finger into the bra, feeling the top of an elegant breast; her other hand moving into the back of the tank top to unhook the bra. Once unfastened, the blonde pulls out her hands and pushes up the bottom hem of her girlfriend’s tank top, then the bra, exposing Jennifer’s bare chest. A soft hand cups one of the breasts and plays around with it. Jennifer places her hand on her girlfriend’s thigh and strokes that smooth skin. Lowering herself, Maggie kisses Jennifer again.

After the kiss, Maggie moves her body back a bit to start kissing her other breast. She starts on the silky flesh before closing in on the nipple. Her other hand makes its way down the waistband of Jennifer’s shorts and into the underwear.

Jennifer lies there smiling as her girlfriend entices her by playing with both her breast and vagina. “Wait, uh, Maggie,” she places a hand on the back of Maggie’s head.

The other blonde withdraws her head and looks at her girlfriend, “Yeah Jennifer?”

“As great as this is, I’m not sure if I’m in the proper mood for sex, Maggie,” the blond agent says drowsily. “I’m pretty tired right now.”

Maggie stops what she’s doing. She looks down at her girlfriend and gives her a tender look. “That’s alright,” she rubs the side of Jennifer’s face. “You look exhausted. I’m going to let you rest.” Maggie pulls down the bra over Jennifer’s breast, hooks it back up, then kindly pulls the tank top back down to the waist. She lies down beside the other woman.

It’s quiet for a moment before Maggie speaks up, “Mind if I ask you something?”

“Ask away.”

“Seeing those papers, I can’t help but wonder how long it will be before the FBI decides to pull you guys out of this case?”

“Well, if I have to guess, two more weeks probably if we aren’t close to catching the unsub,” Jennifer answers.

“Then we’ll find out how well we can deal with a long distance relationship. Here’s hoping you don’t leave earlier.”

“I think we can make it,” Jennifer turns her head to give Maggie a sincere look. “What time are you planning to leave?”

“What time does your team normally wake up to get to work?”

“Around 7 o’clock,” Jennifer answers.

“I’ll leave at 5 then,” responds Maggie.

Jennifer emerges from the bed and moves towards the clock, “Better reset the alarm clock then.” She adjusts the timer then heads back to bed.

They get cozy underneath the blanket. Maggie wraps her arms around the other woman and holds onto her girlfriend. Jennifer sets her hands on top of Maggie’s and hold onto them in return. “What should I do with the spare key?” Maggie wonders.

The blond agent thinks about that, “Hmm just leave it back at the front desk. I don’t plan on staying here too often, but I’ll give the hotel a note to let you have access to the spare key in case I do again.”

Jennifer lets out a sigh before resting the side of her head down on the pillow and closing her eyes, “Goodnight sweetie.”

“Night,” Maggie responds.

Discussing Jennifer leaving also reminded Maggie of something else. That their relationship, no matter how sweet it has become, is doomed from the start. She has committed crimes that she can’t reverse and her life could be over before she even realizes it.

That got Maggie wondering about the case, ‘The police can’t be close to solving the case, can they? No they can’t. They have little evidence to work with, last Jennifer told me. She said the recent callers all sounded crazy, and they have her going over things again. For that matter they haven’t even questioned that many of the cast or crew on set yet,’ Maggie raises an eyebrow after thinking of that last part. ‘At this rate, we’ll be finding out if that long distance relationship is going to work or not. The person they have most likely to figure this out is...’ Maggie looks at the woman beside her.

How twisted is it that the person with the best chance of putting Maggie away is the woman she loves? Maggie doesn’t even know what to think of that. She knew she shouldn’t have gotten too close to Jennifer, but it was a decision she doesn’t regret. The blonde cuddles in closer to her FBI girlfriend until their cheeks are touching. Her arms squeeze a little more so she can hold Jennifer tighter. Her girlfriend smiles at the interaction and gives the hands on her waist a squeeze of her own. Not knowing how much time she has left, Maggie feels the need to try and hold onto what she has now.

*****

Friday and this time Derek is now taking Elle’s place staying with Lila. She and Maggie are laying back in the living room.

Derek comes in to inspect them, “Are things fine here?”

“Yes sir,” Lila nods.

There’s some awkward silence between the profiler and the two blondes. Derek can’t help but let out a slight chuckle, “Okay good. Um, I’ll be back in a while.” He then leaves.

After a short while Maggie’s cell phone goes off. She looks at the number; it’s Jennifer’s. “I’m just going to be in the next room to take this,” she tells Lila.

“No problem hun,” Lila excuses her.

Maggie gets up and walks to the nearest bedroom. She closes the door behind her to make sure Derek doesn’t hear if he’s nearby. “Hey baby,” Maggie says cheerfully.

“Hey Maggie,” says Jennifer from her hotel room. “I’ve decided today to put off my paper work and make up for the last two nights. I want to take you out. What do you say to a movie and dinner?”

“I would love it. But what if one of your colleagues sees us? Might wonder what we’re doing eating dinner together.”

“I know where most of my teammates go to eat, so I’ll just avoid those places. However just to make sure, lets pick a restaurant that’s not romantic, but still nice.”

Maggie smiles at the suggestion, “I can live with that. Where should we meet?”

It didn’t take Jennifer long to think of an answer, “Lets meet up at your place.”

“My place? Sure. When should we be there?”

“Why wait? Lets do it now,” Jennifer answers.

“Sure thing,” Maggie replies. “I’ll see you there babe.”

“See you there.”

Maggie ends the call then steps out of the room. She walks back towards Lila, “I have to go now, Lila. I have a date. Think you’ll be fine by yourself?”

“I think I can handle Derek,” Lila says amused. “Have fun, Mags.”

“Thanks,” Maggie grabs her jacket off the edge of the couch and heads out the door.

*****

Jennifer parks the SUV to the side of Maggie’s apartment. She takes out her phone and calls her girlfriend, “Hey Maggie, where are you right now?”

“Just arrived home a few minutes ago,” she tells the agent.

Jennifer smiles, “Okay then, I’ll be at the front door.”

The blond agent steps out of the vehicle and approaches Maggie’s front door. She rings the doorbell.

Maggie has an amused look on her face when she answers, “Well that was fast. Come inside for a bit, I still have to grab my things.”

“Sure thing. Are we taking your car or mine?” Jennifer asks as she steps inside.

“Let's take my car,” Maggie answers.

*****

The two blondes walk through the entrance of the cinema into the bright, noisy foyer. “So what movie should we watch this time?” Jennifer asks.

“You can pick. I chose the last movie we saw.”

“Hmm, let’s see what they have here,” Jennifer looks up at the movies listed.

*****

They sit together in the theatre, watching Jennifer’s pick on the big screen. Place was pretty crowded. She chose King Kong; didn’t look like Jennifer’s choice in movies was that much different from Maggie’s own.

On the screen is the scene where the survivors of the expedition find themselves in a canyon battling for their lives against oversized creepy crawlers. Adrien Brody is trying to fight off giant bugs, as Jamie Bell loads up a Tommy gun and tries to maintain a steady aim to blast the bugs off Brody.

*****

Hours have passed and the two women finally arrive back at Maggie’s place. They enter through the garage door and are in a cheerful mood. They remove their shoes and place them on the mat. Then make their way towards the living room and take off their jackets and lay back on the couch.

“Boston Pizza, interesting place to have dinner,” comments Maggie.

Jennifer has a smirk on her face, “Well I thought it matched our criteria pretty well.”

Maggie stands up, “Usually after being full on a meal like that, I tend to feel the need to lie down.” The blonde holds out her hands, “Care to join me in the bedroom.”

“With pleasure,” Jennifer takes her girlfriend’s hands. Maggie pulls her off the couch then leads her upstairs.

*****

The bedroom door opens as both women enthusiastically move to the bed while holding onto each other. They jump onto the bed; the sides of their bodies landing on the mattress so they can still look at one another.

They move up the mattress a bit more while still in their positions, getting more centered to the bed. Maggie rolls the two of them to the side, placing Jennifer on her back and herself on top of her girlfriend. Maggie goes in for a kiss while one of her hands moves underneath Jennifer’s top and starts ticking the side of her body, running her fingers along the blond agent’s ribs and kidney area.

Jennifer smiles and giggles as her lips are still touching the other woman’s. Maggie draws back and takes a look at her girlfriend. “Am I making it up to you yet?” Jennifer asks.

“You’re getting there,” Maggie tells her with a smirk. The blonde moves her free hand down and begins to unzip Jennifer’s pants. Her hand delves down into the agent’s panties until it’s resting right on top of her girlfriend’s pleasure center. The tips of Maggie’s fingers now start to tickle Jennifer’s sensitive area.

The blonde agent giggles again from the second touch, “You planning on just tickling me all night?”

“It’s Friday, I could go till morning if I wanted to. It’s not like we’re in a rush,” Maggie answers in a seductive voice.

Jennifer stretches out a bit before reaching up to touch her girlfriend’s face. She then moves her hand down to Maggie’s neck and starts some tickling of her own. “If you’re going to tickle me, I’m going to tickle you back,” the agent jokes.

The women gaze at each other with their own sets of seductive blue eyes. They get comfortable and take things slow, because as Maggie said, they have all night and can go till morning if they want to.

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