Catching up

[liana_bluestar]

First thing, something of notice . . . I just read this on Yahoo! news. How very . . . interesting.

Second, this is going to be a DOOZY of an entry. As the subject header says, I'm catching up. :) Today, two dialogue tips, two original story snippets, and two character profiles.

Comments

[liana_bluestar]

I just thought it was an interesting article. I mostly skimmed over it.

[silver_magess]

I'm guilty of break both of those rules, especially the one on thoughts, because hey I didn't know and well, no one bother to say "Hey Joy, you're doing it wrong!" Nice to know. :D

I'm not good at concrit to be honest, so I'm not going to be able to really give you any unless it jumps right out at me. I will say though, that Torie and Ryan come off very normal and well adjusted, and while I like reading about more disfunctional characters, the well adjustedness is nice and refreshing.

[liana_bluestar]

Thanks! ^_^