Sooooo, I went over to read Shinra: Soldier on her ff.net profile...
I must say... D: I am so sorry for you to have to spork that... that... thing. All 111 chapters of it...
>___< All annoying 111 chapters of it. I sort of gleened over upcoming chapters and gleened over other parts of the story and my mind sort of went... "huh?"
D:
So yes, you are a very brave person to take this up. And please, persevere because the really lulzy chapters where you can blatantly see the ego-stroking and wish fulfillment (then again, we see that all the time in her chapters, but the later chapters reeks of it DDD: And I'm guessing that you know what I'm talking about too) are near the middle-ish parts. >_____<
Keep up with the good work and may the force be with you. 8D
Hey there! I read both of her fanfictions a long time ago and they struck me as being exceptionally bad and trust me, I cannot wait to get to the part you are talking about. I have a list of stuff and everything. It's going to be wonderful because it's so obvious and over the top!
Thank you for your wishes and may the Spork Force guide me through the valley of the shadow of bad fanfiction.
I'm sure you already know this, but I went to check her profile on FF.Net earlier and I saw that all of her stories had been taken down. What's up with that? Did she run away from the big scary internet with her tail between her legs or something?
I love the "the food is worse than cafeteria food!" shtick. -_- Not so overly-used and cliched, noooo, not at all! (Speaking from experience, military food wasn't that bad. ._.)
The Shinra orange juice carton made me grin, by the way. :3
It's almost as if Slave knows absolutely nothing about boot camp, and rather than do any actual research or even rent a damn movie, she decided that it must be exactly like high school.
Also, somehow this chapter managed to be even more dull and full of meaningless chatter than usual.
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I must say... D: I am so sorry for you to have to spork that... that... thing. All 111 chapters of it...
>___< All annoying 111 chapters of it. I sort of gleened over upcoming chapters and gleened over other parts of the story and my mind sort of went... "huh?"
D:
So yes, you are a very brave person to take this up. And please, persevere because the really lulzy chapters where you can blatantly see the ego-stroking and wish fulfillment (then again, we see that all the time in her chapters, but the later chapters reeks of it DDD: And I'm guessing that you know what I'm talking about too) are near the middle-ish parts. >_____<
Keep up with the good work and may the force be with you. 8D
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Thank you for your wishes and may the Spork Force guide me through the valley of the shadow of bad fanfiction.
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She tries to hide the fact that she's super butthurt, but fails hard.
~Iscariot
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The Shinra orange juice carton made me grin, by the way. :3
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I had a lot of fun making and editing stuff for this spork. :)
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And I can tell! And for that we're all grateful because if not for you we wouldn't have so many lulz~. :D
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Also, somehow this chapter managed to be even more dull and full of meaningless chatter than usual.
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