Comments | lian_hua: Shinra SOLDIER Spork!

lian_hua

Shinra SOLDIER Spork!

Mar 05, 2011 20:21

( Shinra SOLDIER Introduction and Chapter 1 spork. )

Comments 24

anonymous March 6 2011, 22:11:44 UTC

After a horrid, horrid day yesterday, I decided to hop over to your LJ on whim today to re-read your sporking of Shinra High (Because I was in terrible need of lulz and cringes after what happened) but instead I see this....

OMG I love you. T_T

Like, you have no clue how much you just made my day. THANK YOU FOR SPORKING THIS MONSTROSITY!!!! ToT Thank you thank you thank you.

Time to actually go read it now for some medicated lulz. >3

anonymous March 6 2011, 22:21:37 UTC

And now that I've read the sporking, lulz. XD

Dude, I think she just tossed Cloud in as a last minute kind of deal since she pretty much forgot about him until the room assignments. When reporting to the secretary only six of them reported to being there. I was like "Er... Strife, Cloud? Anywhere? Anywhere? No? No. Ok then~"

>___<

All in all, brilliant sporking. 8D Tallying out how many times Julia is referred too as Sephi-poo's girlfriend should yield some interesting results.

Please keep up the good work. ^^

lian_hua March 7 2011, 06:58:15 UTC

How did I miss that? *slaps self* I'm going to correct that.

Also: I'm so happy that you liked it. <3333

restos March 7 2011, 01:41:54 UTC

Poor Cloud. ;_;
Why do all the Sephiroth fangirls super hate him? I mean, I get why but. WHY CAN'T THEY JUST LIKE EVERYONE. like me.

This is just. So boring. Making your characters bored and uninterested in everything generally gives you a boring and uninteresting story.

On another note - does Cloud have "mako eyes" from falling into the Lifestream? I can't, for the life of me, remember most of the FFVII goings-on. It's been a while and with Crisis Core, Advent Children and watching videos of Before Crisis, It's like. Lulz. Information overload.

lian_hua March 7 2011, 07:00:25 UTC

To be honest, I like all the characters as well. They are all interesting in their own right and necessary to the story. I love them all. :)

I think Cloud has mako eyes after being experimented on in the Shinra Mansion by the good doctor.

restos March 7 2011, 22:19:52 UTC

The only character I'm wary of is probably Lucrecia, but I'm only saying this as a huge Vincent fan. Haha. But I do like her, just less than, say, Cloud & co.

Ahh, that makes sense!
Oh Hojo, why didn't you kill Julia when you had all the chances in the world.

seiyonashi March 7 2011, 22:56:00 UTC

YAAAAY! You win for sporking this nonsense. Also, Julia is totally a John Freemanesque level of stupid. And being *~ttly srs and badass~*? She fails at it.

lian_hua March 8 2011, 06:19:45 UTC

She fails at everything, except at making me rage.

whm_koorii April 28 2011, 19:21:08 UTC

So I've only just now gotten the courage up to come and look at this (and the time! my own fic writing eats all my time, I tell you!) and... wow.

I mean it's obvious we can't expect her to keep the canon information/timeline right! She can't even keep her own story's timeline right!

And lol, poor Cloud. I'm going to firmly believe he pulled a ninja-vanishing act and is attempting to run for canon until he pops up again.

This fic is denser than a gravity spell!

Off to skim and only read your sporksread the rest slowly. And with frequent breaks hiding in a closet!

anonymous January 20 2012, 05:11:02 UTC

I've tried for Marine CORP boot camp so I'd just like to say that given that Shinra SOLDIER program is a military based program, they would most likely NOT receive their dog tags right away. Marine CORP recruits don't receive dog tags until later in boot camp, to assure that most of the recruits who did not make it under various reasons (fraud, failure to adapt, and serious injury to name a few) will not receive dog tags as it would be a waste of dog tags on recruits who didn't graduate into a full fledged Devil Dog. I would assume that Shinra's military would work under the same basis.