Awakening, PG Merlin/Arthur

Oct 10, 2011 23:59

Title: Awakening
Author: nightothers
Characters: Merlin
Rating: PG
Warning: little mention of blood, modern day fic
Words: 997, nothing more than a drabble
Summary: Merlin gets a hint that basically smacks him in the face.
Disclaimer:In no way do I own Merlin, the show or the legend. BBC owns the show and the bards own the legend. If I owned either Morgana wouldn't ( Read more... )

pg, drabble, merlin/arthur

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lfayth October 14 2011, 04:10:07 UTC
Thanks for commenting <3. And originally this was suppose to be nothing more than a one shot. But I'm not opposed to writing more. Seems it's wanted.

"And I totally love the idea that it was Merlin who died, but because Merlin died - it was Arthur who died, if you get my drift, which you should, 'cause you wrote this fantastic concept <3" Love this even though it leaves me a bit confused. I think you gleamed something that I wasn't aware I put in. Care to let me in on it? :D

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lfayth October 15 2011, 01:22:19 UTC
I really like that. I might incorporate it later on. :)

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quantitativity October 11 2011, 08:17:18 UTC
Powerful last line, evokes emotion very well.
Kudos.

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lfayth October 14 2011, 04:10:32 UTC
Thank you

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owensheart October 11 2011, 13:52:47 UTC
Oh please there has to be more!! this was epic.

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lfayth October 14 2011, 04:11:30 UTC
Hahahah! Thank you. Wasn't planning on expanding but if the muse decides to come back and smack me I will definitely continue. Going to try and start another chapter tonight.

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happyevraftr October 11 2011, 14:42:10 UTC
um...that kinda just ripped me apart- but in a good way.

I agree with all above commenters that there must be more! I want Merlin to find Arthur again after that! This is just a prequel right? RIGHT??

Don't make us beg *bats eyelashes*

<3

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lfayth October 14 2011, 04:12:51 UTC
Seriously with that last line and the eyelash bats you are just asking for trouble. I'm happy it ripped you apart- but in a good way. I'll try to continue. No promises though.

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archaeologist_d October 11 2011, 16:41:28 UTC
I liked that Merlin didn't even realize what was going on until he had a vision of Camlann. Great last line!

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lfayth October 14 2011, 04:14:27 UTC
Thanks! And it makes me super happy that you know the name of it.

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