Art: Artificial Nocturne

[lezzerlee]

Artificial Nocturne by twighlights_blue
Art for Inception Big Bang

Comments

Re: O.O

[lezzerlee]

Thank you!

[lezzerlee]

Read the story!!! Also, thank you!

[lezzerlee]

Thank you so much! I really enjoyed the Sci-fi-ness of the story, I'm glad that came through with such a simple addition to the background.

[yjudaes]

Overall this piece is very effective in presenting a unified color scheme and style. You definitely captured the mood of an artificial nocturne with the color palette, pose, and composition; the image reads as very film noir especially in terms of the positioning of the figures. The clean crisp line weight and flat colors work especially well for you in the figures' faces and heads, and I think that part of the piece is by far the strongest and really draws the eye. The background is lovely as well, subtle enough not to take away from the figures but also detailed enough to be interesting and evocative of mood

[lezzerlee]

This is the best. Thank you. I feel like I do somewhat better with painterly rendering of fabric, which I didn't have time for this round, and I wanted to try a different style anyway. I really do need to study more, and do some life-drawing workshops. I haven't had any classes on illustration/painting in years.

Thanks for the info about their faces. I need stuff like this!

I'm super glad that the mood came across, though. As a designer, if I couldn't the mood & initial impression, I'd be upset.

Thank you again for your extremely thoughtful comment.

[lezzerlee]

Thank you!