Prompt 05. Right-Wing Bitch/Hottie Lesbian 3/3

[lexus_grey]

Olivia chose one of the classier clubs to start out with, figuring she ought to ease Alex in to the subculture. There were two dance floors, one on each level, two bars, same thing, bathrooms, and an area on each story with tables and chairs. Then there was the VIP lounge, which Olivia could access if she wanted to, but she thought that best saved

Comments

[psyche_cuore]

I'm impressed at how quickly you keep churning these things out!

I actually think this is my favourite one so far. I liked that you didn't just make Alex one-dimensional, a complete bitch, that she had layers and emotions and was more complex. It brought a lot of emotion and depth to it, that was really nice.

[lexus_grey]

Thank you so much :) I have always liked the sort of dynamic I put in this story between the characters. The girl who shouldn't fall for another girl, etc. etc. but then realizes that people are people, and that some girls are worth falling for. (*ahem* especially if they are Olivia Benson ahem ahem)
~Lex

[akte]

damn girl...this one is seriously awesome. I can't even begin to explain just how much I loved it, 'cause I'm really not 100% sure myself, but I loved it. As much as each story has had a completely different tone and really can't be compared, I still think this one might well be my favourite so far. So much goodness. I was getting rather distressed when I realised it was about to end. I honestly did not want it to finish. It's 2am, i've got to be up in a few hours for work, but if there was more to read, i'd stay up reading it till I was done.

so, how's that for embarrassingly gushing all over the place? ;)

[lexus_grey]

*purrs* I love it! Thank you so much. Don't be embarrassed, the gushing makes me feel good =D. There's just something about this story, isn't there? I can't quite define it, but I can feel it too.
~Lex

[akte]

There really is. More people need to read it. Not just SVU fans. It needs to be out there for everyone to love. Just need to work out how!

[lowbatterie]

Right. You already know how much I love this one, the only thing is that it's about time you put it up for me to see!

THUNK. Olivia moved to the wall and knocked her head against it. "What's wrong with the pair you're wearing?" she forced herself to ask, ready to bang her head again if needed.

"Are you trying to give yourself a concussion?"

"Yes," Liv answered with a nod.

"OhmyGodstopit!" Olivia said in a rush, holding her hand out to block the view. "I'll ravage you!"

All of this? Wonderful hilarity. Especially the last line. I can just see her shielding her eyes and holding a hand out--guh. Love it. Love you. Got anymore? *grin*

[lexus_grey]

LOL impatient, are we? But that's okay, I like that. Makes me motivated to write more, and more often. Hehehe...
~Lex

[unna_star]

W
O
W

that was a m a z i n g

bravo

[lexus_grey]

*purr* Thank you. And I love the picture in your icon, it's so elegantly beautiful.
~Lex

[half_life33]

wow
BAD idea to read this right before bed.. but i couldn't help it..
holy shit
this is definately my fave so far..
shit.
i am going to get some ice cubes now...
GOD.

[lexus_grey]

LOL apparently you enjoyed it? *faxes over some extra ice cubes* Thank you for the rave review!!!
~Lex