Fanfic: Unplanned Parenthood Chapter Five

Jun 16, 2009 21:01

Title: Unplanned Parenthood
Author: LexKitten
Chapter: Five - Unwelcome Advances
Previous Chapters: Prologue, Chapter One, Chapter Two, Chapter Three, Chapter Four
In This Chapter: Jack avoids punishment, while Sam endures a visit from an old “friend”(?) - Rodney McKay. 
Rating: Teen

A/N: Someone asked me in a comment a while back, how people that knew ( Read more... )

stargate, jack/sam, unplanned parenthood, fanfic, kid!fic

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lexlemon June 16 2009, 12:32:12 UTC
Ah, you're quick =P

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sharp2799 June 16 2009, 13:23:28 UTC
LOL I love it when McKay gets put in his place. Hope you update again soon, I'm completely addicted to this fic!

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lexlemon June 16 2009, 13:47:58 UTC
lol, Sharp, you are my most faithful commenter. You're always so quick to read my updates =)

I love putting McKay in his place >.> ha. He is so wonderfully egoistic. Great fun.

My exams are over soon, so I will hopefully get some time to write!

Thanks, as always, for the feedback! I really appreciate it.

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lilferret June 16 2009, 15:16:35 UTC
I really do love this chapter. I enjoy writing McKay, myself, because he's just so fun!

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lexlemon June 16 2009, 23:30:57 UTC
Aww, sankyuu!

He *is* fun, isn't he? I often wish there'd been more McKay in SG1 *sigh* =P

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draco_somnians June 16 2009, 15:50:14 UTC
“My daddy doesn’t like you,” Henrietta told him.

“Well, your daddy is probably jealous,” McKay accused, putting his hands on his hips in an imitation of Henrietta’s own offensive stance. “Because I’m a lot smarter than him.”

“Maybe,” Henrietta admitted. “But my dad could whoop your ass.”

ROFL!!! Henry rocks! Definitely her father's daughter!

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lexlemon June 16 2009, 23:33:41 UTC
lol, Jack's wise-cracks are a dominant gene! =P

Thanks for commenting =)

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cherrypie23uk June 16 2009, 18:53:46 UTC
Loving your story!
Absolutely loving your story!!

I can't wait for chapter 6. I can't wait to find out who is gonna be baby sitter.

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lexlemon June 16 2009, 23:40:52 UTC
lol! Love your icon! <3

Thanks so much for commenting =) I'll try to update again soon =)

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