Stargate Fanfic: Unplanned Parenthood - Chapter Four

May 30, 2009 00:02

Title: Unplanned Parenthood
Author: LexKitten
Chapter: Four - Out of Nowhere
Previous Chapters: Prologue, Chapter One, Chapter Two, Chapter Three
Summary: “Carter, do you ever get the feeling these alternate universes are trying to tell us something?”
Rating: Teen

A/N: The exciting action chapter! Hooray =P If I survive my law exams, I will post another ( Read more... )

stargate, romance, jack/sam, sam, fanfic, unplanned parenthood, jack, kid!fic

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sharp2799 May 29 2009, 15:18:49 UTC
“Uh-oh. We lost her? “Daniel moaned. “Jack is going to kill us.”

“I disagree,” Teal’c replied. “Major Carter is a much quicker marksman. O’Neill will not have the opportunity.”

I am so loving this!!!

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lexlemon May 29 2009, 15:50:00 UTC
Lol! Wow you comment fast! >.<

I seriously love Daniel & Teal'c banter. It's my second favorite thing about reading/writing Sam/Jack fanfic. (After the hotness that is Jack and Sam, of course).

Thanks so much for reading <3

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pbeeslysweater May 29 2009, 23:12:58 UTC
I'm really enjoying this series! I really like the way you approach the question of Jack and Sam having a kid, but not really having a kid...such a paradox. It's a wonderful read!
I love the way you write all the characters, you get in their heads so well...such fun!
I'm really looking forward to more!

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bluewillowtree May 29 2009, 23:49:51 UTC
“Teal’c’s a father, right? I’m sure he knows how to entertain a kid.”

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“Teal’c, you’re a father,” Daniel cried, pleadingly. “You must know how to entertain a kid.”

I loved this transition. And “I disagree,” Teal’c replied. “Major Carter is a much quicker marksman. O’Neill will not have the opportunity.”
cracked me up.

Fabulous chapter! I adore this story and can't wait for the next installment.

Good luck with your exams!

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lexlemon May 30 2009, 06:55:45 UTC
Glad you liked it. Those were my favorite bits too =P

Thanks so much for the comment! And thanks for the luck with my exams, I'm gonna need it ;_;.

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gspin May 30 2009, 02:26:53 UTC
Really great!

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lexlemon May 30 2009, 06:14:53 UTC
Thanks for reading! <3

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not_a_zatarc May 30 2009, 04:29:17 UTC
Oh crap! What the heck was that?! x_0; *gasps* Daddy Jack and Mommy Sam to save the day! Guess they won't be putting Daniel and Teal'c on babysitting duty for a while. XD heh.

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lexlemon May 30 2009, 06:23:30 UTC
Lol. There is nothing cooler than world-saving-parents. <3 Poor Daniel and Teal'c - Jack is going to kill them =P

Thanks so much for reading! <3

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