Fic: "Here Comes the Sun." (CLex, Request).

Feb 10, 2011 13:15

Here Comes the Sun
Author: Lexalicious70
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: CLex
Rating: PG13
Genre: Romance
Word Count: 1,154
Summary: As spring comes to the farm, Clark and Lex reflect on the long winter and their journey into light.
Disclaimer: I don’t own them, the WB does. For fun not profit.
A/N: For my darling herohunter, who needed some feel-good Clex. I hope ( Read more... )

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ctbn60 February 11 2011, 00:05:29 UTC
I adore this!! Wonderful totally wonderful and just what I needed. I'm so linked to the seasons too and I do not do well physically or emotionally in the winter.

This line was amazing and made me cry:
Because you’re like the sun. I don’t know if it’s because you absorb its rays like a solar cell or if it’s because of some other reason, but I never feel cold or empty when I’m with you, from the day we met.” Lex chuckled, a bit of color staining his pale skin. “That, and whenever you touch me, I melt.”

Wonderful!!! I hope it brightened herohunters day!

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lexalicious70 February 11 2011, 00:56:47 UTC
I'm so glad you liked this, thanks! It's not my usual fare, but the bunny was a good one, and I gave it a go.

I'm really flattered at the emotions this roused in you. I couldn't have gotten better feedback! *Passes the tissues*

Thanks for reading and for the comment. From a writer's standpoint, your words were exactly what I needed today, too.

I hope she likes it as well!

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sue_dreams February 11 2011, 01:32:10 UTC
Nice! It's probably not surprising, given the underlying theme of seasons and sunlight, that this fic left me with a warm feeling. Warm and light, like an early summer breeze.

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lexalicious70 February 11 2011, 01:55:43 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! What a nice comment. :)

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cinderella81 February 11 2011, 02:38:20 UTC
OMG I totally ♥ ♥ ♥ !!!!!!

So beautiful, hon!!!

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lexalicious70 February 11 2011, 02:42:01 UTC
Thanks, wifey! I'm surprised at the comments for this little fic, but I'm flattered, too! I'm glad you like it!

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tasabian February 11 2011, 03:52:58 UTC
Yay, you wrote Clex!

I love how perfectly you describe the intimacy of the relationship:
Lex dropped down into Clark’s lap just as casually as he might have sat back down in his own chair. Clark put his arms around him

And this is just a gorgeous description:
He padded barefoot down the hall, following the sound of his partner’s heartbeat, to find Lex sitting in the sunny kitchen, the early-morning rays touching the polished wood of his mother’s kitchen table a burnt umber and turning Lex’s lapis eyes an even brighter blue.

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lexalicious70 February 11 2011, 03:59:26 UTC
I still love CLex . . . I just don't get as many bunnies as I used to for it. Maybe I'll do an old school rewatch (up to season four) and get some mojo for the Big Bang!

I'm glad you liked it so much! Thanks for the detailed feedback. :)

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rosy5000 February 11 2011, 05:12:11 UTC
Awww! This left me feeling all melty! :) So sweet and lovely. I especially love the easy closeness between Clark and Lex. ♥

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lexalicious70 February 11 2011, 18:20:40 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading. :)

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