Fic for Guinevere_81 - Venting the Spleen

Dec 26, 2016 14:48

Recipient: Guinevere_81
Title: Venting the Spleen
Characters: James Hathaway and Robbie Lewis
Rating: gen--PG
Word count: 3248
Warnings: none
Summary: Hathaway discovers that his resemblance to the Crown Prince of Vordinia is a pain in the guts.

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exchange: secret santa 2016

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Thank you guinevere_81 December 26 2016, 22:39:57 UTC
Thank you so much. I feel very undeserving of such a treat after having failed to finish my own story.

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Re: Thank you dawnebeth January 15 2017, 20:50:08 UTC
Now that the master list is up and authors revealed, I can say--you're very welcome. I was excited to write my first full story in this fandom.

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wendymr December 27 2016, 23:42:21 UTC
Loved everything in this: James's contempt for the Crown Prince's derivative opinions and taste in clothing, the vividly-depicted mobbing and stabbing scene (with James not quite able to believe that he's seen Lewis), and of course James waking up to discover Lewis with him and realising that he's clearly been there for some time. The invitation for Christmas and Lewis's uncertainty about contacting James's family were perfect. Great job, Santa!

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dawnebeth January 15 2017, 20:52:34 UTC
Aw, thank you so much. I was nervous to write my first full story in Lewis (I'd put them in a crossover once before), so hearing what worked for you makes me very happy.

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complexlight January 6 2017, 21:57:37 UTC
This is so great!

I love that Robbie just happened to be passing Merton College at that exact time!

I love James' vehement denial of ever having consulted Wikipedia :-)

And I love how much of their relationship you've captured, as they talk about nothing of import:

“Bring you grapes when I visit next, shall I?”

“Prefer satsumas,” James suggested.

Excellent!

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dawnebeth January 15 2017, 20:53:40 UTC
Well, of course James would never use Wikipedia. snort. Thank you for saying that I got their relationship right, that's always what I strive for.

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