Comments | leviticus_lied: Supernatural: Inner Children (2)

leviticus_lied

Supernatural: Inner Children (2)

Apr 04, 2008 16:41

He woke up a lot faster after that, and rubbed his eyes until the shadow gained resolution and he recognized Sammy, tummy sticking out petulantly with his chubby baby fat and standing way too close for personal comfort.

“Um. Good morning?” Sam hazarded.

Sammy chewed on his lower lip. “Can we… eat?”

“What?”

Dean stepped up next to Sammy ( Read more... )

fanfiction, sam+dean, supernatural

Comments 17

dodificus April 5 2008, 09:34:04 UTC

Ten-year-old Dean was back to sizing him up with a prospector’s patience, seeing the gold in the riverbed.

I liked that turn of phrase, I can see weeDean's facial expression exactly:)

teh reviewage 3 rotynd April 16 2008, 04:22:32 UTC

Prodigal returning by the back door ( ... )

teh reviewage 4 rotynd April 16 2008, 04:22:49 UTC

“Can’t change him. If you do, I won’t get Sam, and that’ll suck ( ... )

angelita26 April 23 2008, 07:57:58 UTC

Wow! Really awesome story. I really loved Dean and Sam co-existing with mini!Dean and mini!Sam, and how Dean remembered it happening back then too. What a cool creature to write about!

There's only one thing I'm confused about... Why did mini!Sam have blue eyes?

Thanks for sharing!

leviticus_lied April 23 2008, 18:09:20 UTC

Because I'm silly and I thought I'd FIXED ALL THOSE. For the first two thousand or so words, I thought Sam had blue eyes, but then found out the truth and goddamn but I didn't catch them all.

I'll get it. I'm determined.

muffaletta April 23 2008, 15:15:31 UTC

Ha! I could just see Sam's mental wheels turning, trying to figure out the temporal paradoxes! While Dean is like, "Um, minime and I shot the Smurf." Love it!

Terrific fic. Interesting that little Dean wasn't so thrilled with grown up Sam, while adult Dean didn't want him to change. Nice insight into the brothers' often complicated relationship....