I haven't read an inner voice for River quite like this before and I'm in awe that you managed to maintain it for the entire story. For me, it read kind of like she moves, beautiful and different. The way she related to the world, the way she thought about her world and the people in it, the way she *described them and their actions. Amazing.
I'm definitely going to do one of those pretentious commentary things, because there are layers in this that I at least want to attempt to explain.
For instance, there is a rule: A person may only speak aloud the name of the person they fit with. Uh, only River knows that rule, but, her saying 'Mal' means 'I love you', so.
dodificus rec'd this and I took a chance - I have to say I'm glad I did.
Lovely, and so very, very River - if I wasn't already in love with this fandom you would have converted me...
Or... alternatively - if I wasn't already in love with this fandom you would have confused the heck out of me - layers upon layers of River's charater and personality... and nothing about her easy to understand. Perfectly written.
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For instance, there is a rule: A person may only speak aloud the name of the person they fit with. Uh, only River knows that rule, but, her saying 'Mal' means 'I love you', so.
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And I LOVE River's rule:D
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http://leviticus-lied.livejournal.com/24033.html
I'm really, really excited about it, is all.
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Lovely, and so very, very River - if I wasn't already in love with this fandom you would have converted me...
Or... alternatively - if I wasn't already in love with this fandom you would have confused the heck out of me - layers upon layers of River's charater and personality... and nothing about her easy to understand. Perfectly written.
Off to read the commentary now :) *g*
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