A Drop in the Ocean

[level_head]

© 2006 Level_HeadHe moved carefully over the ice, occasionally slipping on the crystals frozen out of the methane rich atmosphere of this world

Comments

[makovette]

Good stuff LH, thanks for posting it here! :)

Is there any prognosis on your Deep Impact project?

Thanks!
Allen

[torakiyoshi]

Yes, yes! I agree with the comment and the question!

Have the best

-=TK

[level_head]

Thank you.

And yes.

The prognosis is that it is terminally boring. Many elements can be salvaged, but the basic story line needs much rework.

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[blacktigr]

This is the first thing I have read for fun since X-mas break. It was well worth the wait. :)

[level_head]

Thank you! I well remember your editing skills!

I'm glad you've been able to take a bit of time for fun. And pleased to provide it.

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[the_lizard_rat]

If she has good editing skills, maybe I should ask her to read my story I'm working on...

Lizard Rat out.
Still a Scribbling Lupine in Albany NY

[level_head]

Her life seems pretty busy.

Incidentally, using aspects of other's plots in your stories is generally not a problem. Aristotle described a set of plots when have been used ... a lot. ];-)

By the time you fit a plot to your particular needs, it generally is to that extent yours, and no longer is "just like" another one. Particularly if you put some imagination to it.

Good luck.

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[wwsmithus]

Outstanding! I truly enjoyed the story, your style reminds me of Isaac Asimov and reads as well as any of his shorts.

[level_head]

Thank you!

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