Comments | levarris: delta

levarris

delta

Aug 12, 2006 10:30

Once there was a very old man who lived alone in a somewhat remote area of ( Read more... )

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bode August 12 2006, 19:45:59 UTC

Ohh, you. That story positively reeked of you. Especially the description at the beginning... and the ending. I liked it a lot. Well done!

levarris August 12 2006, 19:49:40 UTC

yeah I'm starting to notice a pattern with my endings...
seems they all involve some form of minor/major death

xxm4dh4tt3rxx August 13 2006, 00:42:12 UTC

Now that I am awake... it all makes much more sense. God... I can be such an idiot sometimes. /:

^^
The revised version is still good, and... obviously it got the whole thing across.

;>>

erosionsetsin August 14 2006, 03:03:09 UTC

I really enjoyed that. Very positively dark. That inspired me to write a short myself. hmm... but what to write about?

levarris August 15 2006, 00:56:29 UTC

hey thanks! wow...i've inspired someone. Could be dangerous with this kind of story.

sleepis4theweak August 15 2006, 09:06:52 UTC

Ah, love in the first degree.

levarris August 17 2006, 22:19:24 UTC

well thank-ee