Comments | leucocrystal: FIC: Take Your Time

leucocrystal

FIC: Take Your Time

Oct 01, 2006 23:50

TITLE: Take Your Time
(alternate link @ AO3)
FANDOM: Veronica Mars
SUMMARY: Keith doesn't know how to look at or touch his daughter for the first time in his life.
CHARACTER(S)/PAIRING(S): Keith's POV; Veronica, Logan, Logan/Veronica.
RATING: PG-13; slight language.
DISCLAIMER: Rob Thomas owns all (in more ways than one).
SPOILERS: All 44 ( Read more... )

fanfic: vmars, tv: vmars

Comments 98

lkp75 October 2 2006, 10:21:51 UTC

First time I've read one of your fics and I really enjoyed it. Loved that it was from Keith's perspective and seeing how much he has changed his opinion towards Logan. It's always interesting to see a couple's relationship from outside rather than being in the middle.

I'll go off to read some of your other stuff now.

leucocrystal October 3 2006, 09:33:36 UTC

Thanks very much for stopping by and taking the time to read and review! I really appreciate it. I figured, having done so many fics already that show L/V from one of their perspectives, it'd be a nice, new challenge to try showing that from the outside.

I hope you enjoy the rest! :)

insunshine October 2 2006, 11:11:50 UTC

I haven't read facfic for the LONGEST time, and I'm so glad that my bursting back in story was this. It's really, really excellent, and I love it, and you get a PRIZE for being so awesome, I mean it.

I had many, many favorite lines, but this one is my favorite, because I am a Cassidy-whore:

since the night everything apparently went to hell in the form of a scared, scarred little boy plummeting from a rooftop.

I thought that that was a perfect description of him, and the situation.

God, I can't tell you how much I love this story.

It's seriously great.

leucocrystal October 3 2006, 09:34:43 UTC

Aww, that's very flattering! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review -- it always means so much.

I'm so happy you enjoyed so much. :)

ofparsnip October 2 2006, 11:49:11 UTC

reading this made my morning. thank you! you got the voices spot-on, and it was just so great. :-D

leucocrystal October 3 2006, 09:35:20 UTC

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review -- I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed it so well, and it means a lot. :)

serenitysea October 2 2006, 12:18:49 UTC

OMG.

So much love it's not even funny.

*collapses*

leucocrystal October 3 2006, 09:35:48 UTC

Hee, thank you very much -- I'm so happy to hear you liked it! :)

pippajane October 2 2006, 12:27:08 UTC

Wow, I adored this! Tomorrow when I have some time I am going to go searching for more :) It captured Veronica, Logan and Keith so beautifully, in a way that both recognises the horrible things all the had been through and yet sees so much hope for all of their futures. I loved it, thank you!

leucocrystal October 3 2006, 09:36:46 UTC

I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed the fic! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review -- it means a lot.

As for more, just click the "fanfic" tag at the top of this entry to view the other... four (I think?) that I've written for VM, and I hope you enjoy those as well! :)