Friend away! I might not friend back because I can't really keep up with my flist, but I'd be pleased to have you around. It's refreshing to hear someone's honest thoughts about fic!
Hi there! I just read Silver Tongues and wanted to tell you how neat I thought it was. There is this delicious malicious undercurrent throughout the fic, planted firmly in the beginning, nurtured with all that serpentine alliteration, and unfurled at the end. If I were alone, I would have read it aloud :0) My favorite part was the metal metaphor; it gave me a strong picture of Draco's condition and their nature of his relationship with Harry.
This reminded me some of Dark Asphodel's Eros Affair contribution because of the powerful language, the brevity, the darkness, and the biblical allusions. (Here, if you're interested.)
Thanks for participating in the fest, I really enjoyed your writing!
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Friend away! I might not friend back because I can't really keep up with my flist, but I'd be pleased to have you around. It's refreshing to hear someone's honest thoughts about fic!
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This reminded me some of Dark Asphodel's Eros Affair contribution because of the powerful language, the brevity, the darkness, and the biblical allusions. (Here, if you're interested.)
Thanks for participating in the fest, I really enjoyed your writing!
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