Another fic type thing, with spoilers

[lettered]

I did another Harry Potter fic. I don't even know what it is. I just have all these thoughts, and they come out, and they rhyme! Jossverse, I still love you, even if HP is so shiny and new right now.

Meta-y, gen, short, with SPOILERS. It's about the color of Harry's eyes, the killing curse, Neville Longbottom's thumb...

Comments

[reverdybrune]

Oh, ow. Poetic and haunting. Good job!

[lettered]

Thanks so much!

[soberloki]

Ow, damn it. I love all of this meta on the connections and disconnects between these characters and especially how Snape's plea is everyone's plea.

Look at me.

[lettered]

Thanks! I'm glad the repetition of that phrase worked for you--I was uncertain about how gratuitous it would feel.

[omnie]

Oof, so good. I really like the last one, with everything ping-ponging back and forth.

[lettered]

Thanks! I actually rewrote the last one about a bajillion times, so I'm glad you liked the end result.

[lettered]

Ginny's is my favorite too, and I kept wondering whether I should just cut the rest and leave the Ginny one. So I'm glad you liked the Voldie one...I'm not sure I said quite what I wanted to about the child under the seat in Harry's mind. I thought it was one of the most powerful and disturbing parts of the book.

Thanks so much!

[iluvsockz]

I found this absolutely amazing, and the constant refrain of 'look at me' was completely haunting and memorable. Well done, I'm bookmarking this one.

[lettered]

Thank you! And I'm glad you liked the repetition of that phrase--I wasn't sure it would work.