Best Souvenir, chapter 16

[lettered]

Title: Best Souvenir
Rating: PG for now
Warnings: None for now
Pairings: just B/A for now
Summary: Whistler never existed. Buffy and Angel meet after the End of Days is over. Future fic, alternate reality.
A/N: Thanks to a2zmom for making this so much clearer.

Previous chapters can be found here.

Comments

[a2zmom]

Mostly, I think I just annoyed you to distraction on this chapter. Heh.

Which was no help at all, since she couldn’t read a map to save her life; for some reason Giles had never included cartography in her repetoire of ass-kicking and world saviorism.

Yeah, I know exactly how she feels. And the streets are all windy and twisty down there!

Nevermind Andrew, she told herself; what about Warren? A soul didn’t equal good and humanity didn’t equal decency and a centimeter on her map must not equal three city blocks, or else she’d already gone too far down the Bowery.

perfect Buffy left turn into another topic.

But if there was something funny about Jenny or the situation-something demonic-Angel would’ve sensed it with his vamp feelers and told her. Right?

I really love how much obviously Buffy trusts Angel, although it's subconscious at the moment.

Don't forget: BONES TONIGHT

And I can't to get the revised next chapter.

[lettered]

You didn't annoy me at all! I just didn't quite know what you were getting at . . . I get into a mind-set, you know, and I need someone to argue with me before I can start seeing what they mean. I'm sorry for that but you do an *excellent* job. Thanks so much.

Hee! I'm so glad you liked the parts I added...your advice about Buffy/maps was such a wonderful addition to this.

Yeah . . . my family got TiVo. No more missage for me.

Are you saying you can't get to the revised chapter? I can resend...

Thanks again for the final edit on this.

[a2zmom]

It appears that I should not read my e-mail after 11 PM because I am embarrassingly incompetent. I do have chapter 17 and I now off to read.

Send me a brain, stat.

[makd]

Whoa! Long time, no update, and now: like water in the desert....

IOW: great update, great use of characters. glad this fic is back.

[lettered]

Hee! Yeah, it's not getting abandoned, it's just slow...hopefully it might go a little faster now...

Thanks so much. Your encouragement always brings a happy to my little world of fandom.

[chrisleeoctaves]

I am having an excellent tkp week!
That said- I can't wait until this fic is done so that I can start from the beginning. I want to immerse myself in this world again- because it's so great.

[lettered]

I've been having a getting-my-pride-stroked-by-Chrislee week.

Thanks a lot--both for liking this and your encouragement/work/comments on that other bane of my existence. It means so much to me.

[my_daroga]

Buffy's really bad lying makes me uncomfortable. Very nice, bringing Jenny in--I totally didn't suspect. I'm glad you're working on this again!

[lettered]

I hope that's the good uncomfortable.

I'm glad you didn't expect Jenny!

Thanks so much, K.

[violaclaire]

Yay, TBS update!

Buffy's attempt at lying here is great--she always sucked at undercover, didn't she? ;) I loved this line:

Angel should’ve given her a dark mistress vocab list. Learn these words by Thursday! There could’ve been a spelling bee, after.

It's such a wonderful Buffy mixture of cute and faintly morbid.

[lettered]

Hee thanks.

I added that line pretty last minute so I'm glad you liked it.

And hi I hope you've been well!