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Best Souvenir, chapter 13

Jan 03, 2006 20:45

Chapter thirteen of Best Souvernir. (Whistler never existed. Buffy and Angel meet after the End of Days is over. Future fic, alternate reality.)

A/N: Big thanks to a2zmom who has picked up on my fault of over-explaining characters until they're no longer interesting.

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rating: r, genre: au, character: angel, character: buffy, fic: buffyverse, fandom: buffyverse, fic, ship: buffy/angel, fic: best souvenir, length: wip

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a2zmom January 4 2006, 03:30:21 UTC

Ubel really does make my skin crawl. So yummy.

lettered January 4 2006, 03:57:46 UTC

Yay! Glad he was creepy enough.

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lettered January 4 2006, 03:59:06 UTC

Glad you liked it. And yeah, this is the first really sexy touchy thing that happens between B/A, but for the most part it doesn't read as sexy touchy because ew, Ubel, and everything else. But I'm glad some of that came through for you anyway!

lostakasha January 4 2006, 04:10:43 UTC

This is creepy, raunchy, sad....what a neat concept. I read all 13 chapters in this one sitting, and I'm really not able to comment in any eloquent way at the moment -- but I'm loving this story! Love them in Manhattan, especially. Wonderful!

a2zmom January 4 2006, 04:22:28 UTC

That's because Manhattan is the greatest city in the world!

(**native NYC pride**)

lettered January 4 2006, 04:50:51 UTC

Wow! This is a long fic already, so I'm so impressed I kept you sitting that long. Thanks for you kind words. Especially the raunchy. Ubel gives me the wiggins.

Also, I'm loving your icon recently.

semby January 4 2006, 04:23:08 UTC

Um, yes, Ubel is extremely icky and creepy. But this chapter was very yum. I enjoyed.

lettered January 4 2006, 04:51:57 UTC

huzzah for ick. Glad he came out gross. And as always, thanks.

terilyn4 January 4 2006, 04:27:03 UTC

yay, new chappie!!! knew threatening A2Zmom with a kick to the rear would work :D

this was great, that Ubel is really gross, don't like him at all... just reading what he does makes my skin want to do the Lambada into the other room away from the pc.

loved the imagery of one hand of Angel groping Buffy in front and the other frantically trying to soothe her and keep her from breaking Ubel's icky neck.

ya think if I threaten A2Zmom with a red hot poker, the next chappie will be ready sooner? :D

lettered January 4 2006, 04:55:00 UTC

STOP THREATENING MY BETA OR I WILL USE THE CAPSLOCK OF DOOM ON YOU! OF DOOM, I TELL YOU!

Your skin doing the Lambada into the other room is a really gross image. Or were you going to take your body with you?

I liked that image too. I liked that she knew exactly what he was trying to do, that she could feel it in his body and his hands. I guess it's good I like what I write! ;o)

Thanks, as always.

terilyn4 January 4 2006, 05:04:41 UTC

***STOP THREATENING MY BETA OR I WILL USE THE CAPSLOCK OF DOOM ON YOU! OF DOOM, I TELL YOU!***

what's a capslock of doom??? and it's fun to threaten your beta :-p

***Your skin doing the Lambada into the other room is a really gross image. Or were you going to take your body with you?***

nope, my body was staying at the pc while my skin Lambaded to the other room... glad i could gross ya out *snickers*

lettered January 4 2006, 05:49:40 UTC

THIS IS THE CAPSLOCK OF DOOM!!!

See how capslock-y it is? And look, there's even extra exclamation points. If you're very very naughty I will use eleventies and frowning emoticons at you. It could get ugly. Better back down now.

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