Risa; is, isn't, did, didn't, will, won't, why, how

Aug 23, 2009 18:57

[OOC: Tying up a loose end. Or not. The following takes (took...) place on Day...Four. Before they realized George was MIA.]George had left before they'd awoken to go fishing, or some such thing, and Winona was doing something with the other women, and though he would normally have missed them, today Chris was exceptionally glad to be alone. Fewer ( Read more... )

on tenterhooks, risa, ex-wife, son???

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headnursechapel August 24 2009, 00:58:39 UTC
[[OOC: tenses look great - the only thing I spotted was one letter missing :D -

It was an experience he never thought he'd have

in the last long paragraph, should be he'd never thought (or "he had never thought").

I'm interested to see how this plays out!]]

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letspunchit August 24 2009, 23:03:38 UTC
[OOC: Thanks for letting me know! :D *fixes*]

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just_uhura August 24 2009, 04:58:47 UTC
(OOC: Aww, Pike might be a baby daddy. That's so cute and I keep picturing Thandie anyway so bravo on a perfect choice for this!)

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letspunchit August 24 2009, 23:04:27 UTC
[OOC: I'm almost sorry they're leaving Risa because they are leaving Thandie Newton behind XD]

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