Comments | lesshormonal: You're gonna be fine, don't hold it inside // If you're hurt right now, then let it all come out

lesshormonal

You're gonna be fine, don't hold it inside // If you're hurt right now, then let it all come out

May 18, 2011 18:47

She likes New York at night
She dreams of running away
Shine on bright like the sun
And even the sky turns gray
I need you to hear me say
I need you to hear me say

Breathe, just breathe
Take the world off your shoulders, put it on me
Breathe, just breathe
Let the life that you live be all that you need
~Breathe by Ryan Star~

( Moves like a dancer in light // Spinning around to the sound // But sometimes she falls down )

(what) ic, (verse) unnamed skins crossover, (what) prompt, (who) james cook | cookiegotnothin

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seeyou_smile May 19 2011, 01:04:49 UTC

I'll log into the proper journal in a bit but I want you to know it doesn't blow.

cookiegotnothin May 19 2011, 01:51:32 UTC

Okay. Now that I'm in the correct journal, I'm going to give you a real comment. I love this, and not just because I like you. I know you'd been worried that you wouldn't get his voice down right, but it was just fine. I could hear the puzzlement in his voice and everything.

I love that despite the stupid crap about the airplane you've stuck to what was really more plausible a mode of transportation for them to go to Nationals. They really should be on a bus. WTF RIB. WTF. I love that Rachel's surprisingly quiet. I love it when she's quiet actually... because those moments are rare. And Cook liked it too, because he says if he'd had to sit on a bus for a whole day and hear her non-stop, then someone would've gotten hurt.

Most importantly, I love that you never let Quinn forget that she's got a daughter and that she thought it prudent enough to let him meet her, because rightly speaking, this moment is hers to have. He's so very pleased by it though, and he swears he won't even make fun of her when she starts up with the water

lesshormonal May 19 2011, 03:49:32 UTC

Notice how I kept dialogue to a minimum, though. Especially on his end. That was specifically so, if I didn't really get it right, I couldn't completely butcher him.

Well that's just common sense. One season they can't even afford a handicap accessible bus, and the next they can afford plane tickets for all of them? And even if the kids are paying themselves, that doesn't explain how Sam is going. Did they have a bake sale for him too? And I just love the idea of Rachel sitting there glaring at them all and rolling her eyes repeatedly. Also? Can you not see her writing shit on that notepad and just waving it in everybody's face?

And awww....of course she wants Cook to meet her. She loves him and, despite the fact that the writers seem desperate to make her forget everything that happened last year, she loves Beth.

dontcrysammy May 19 2011, 14:08:52 UTC

You've ruined the finale for me. Whatever happens will never be as good as this.

...Not that I expected the finale to be good, but whatever.

lesshormonal May 19 2011, 21:53:32 UTC

Awwww.....thank you, bb. At least the songs are pretty good?

IDK. I'm trying to hold onto hope that there'll be Quick interaction and/or that Quinn's "plan" somehow involves Beth, but then I remember how much RIB hate Quinn and it's almost impossible.