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Title: Pornography Starring Your Mother
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Author Note: The following written work contains materials and characters that the author does not own. It was written purely for personal entertainment purposes, and the author promises that she is not making any profits from it. Thank you.
Credits= Valve and Ect.
Title: Pornography Starring Your Mother
Fandom: Team ( Read more... )
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Over all I was very impressed, the story hung together nicely, the action was well paced, and the dialogue seemed very natural. The only thing that could be improved was slightly clunky sentences here and there during the exposition-y bitz. But over all its fantastic :D
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