I told you I liked it over the phone, but I'll say it again. XD Looking forward to seeing part two to this real soon. I'm going to highlight things I didn't notice before, because there are a few. o.o 1. Spartica's Archon is discovered by Phelegethon in year 33, and you stated she was from Jay. Does this mean that she is from Archon, or is she just a Surfacer who just so happened to be in Archon? 2. You said the Great Contagion was/is a virus. Does it have a physical form? I can't remember if you told me. XP 3. I find it amusing that the Beginning and End were lovers. *happyfaic* On a side note, since I'm bumping off Epsilon and Nylinnia, I'm going to change the respective terms in my timeline to Zeta and Reginlief. The two Networks were so similar to their counterparts that nothing really changes; except for reference points. Besides, they didn't have very good discoveries in the "Network Advances" entry. XD For reference, this brings our Networks to: Iota Zeta Sigma Cuprous Azartran Reginlief Cetera Sparta
1. She's from Archon, but she's also a native of Jay. I've changed a lot of things, as I said, and Phelegethon is going to play a VERY big role soon - along with some siblings and the creation of yet another naming pun in our series
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Looking forward to seeing part two to this real soon.
I'm going to highlight things I didn't notice before, because there are a few. o.o
1. Spartica's Archon is discovered by Phelegethon in year 33, and you stated she was from Jay. Does this mean that she is from Archon, or is she just a Surfacer who just so happened to be in Archon?
2. You said the Great Contagion was/is a virus. Does it have a physical form? I can't remember if you told me. XP
3. I find it amusing that the Beginning and End were lovers. *happyfaic*
On a side note, since I'm bumping off Epsilon and Nylinnia, I'm going to change the respective terms in my timeline to Zeta and Reginlief. The two Networks were so similar to their counterparts that nothing really changes; except for reference points. Besides, they didn't have very good discoveries in the "Network Advances" entry. XD
For reference, this brings our Networks to:
Iota
Zeta
Sigma Cuprous
Azartran
Reginlief
Cetera
Sparta
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