Eternal Damnation

[leonix8238]

Liquid fire fills his veins, chest heaving against time.

Memories, torturous, flashing through his mind.

Eyes black as coal, drained of all their will

Deep into the wood he scratches, for fear's iron grip has taken hold.

Eternal damnation awaits you see, a life of sin, rot and murder cannot be cleansed.

Into the furnace that

Comments

[leonix8238]

Thank you!

I guess it could be...to me it's definately an more sinister Snape than DH at the very least.

I get the impression Snape does not enjoy 'being good at being bad' quite so much as dear Lestat though :)

[leonix8238]

Actually the more i've read it...it sounds like he's been given the dark blood doesn't it?? Hmm...subconciously did that maybe?? lol Nah just dumb luck but i like it all the more now, thank you for pointing this out to me!

[hestia_lacey]

Shiveringly good, lovely. It almost reads like religious verse is some places; the rhythm and cadence remainds me of prophesy. I like that quality.