Comments | lennoxave: A Big Gay Team of Dancing Gays, ch. 1: Adding Up the Total of a Love That's True

lennoxave

A Big Gay Team of Dancing Gays, ch. 1: Adding Up the Total of a Love That's True

Jan 09, 2011 17:22

Title: A Big Gay Team of Dancing Gays: Adding Up the Total of a Love That's True
Author: lennoxave
Pairing,Character(s): Brittana, Puck, Sue
Rating: PG-13 (language and some talk of sexual situations)
Word Count: 2,299
Spoilers: Through 2.10, "A Very Glee Christmas."
Summary: Brittany and Santana finally get together.
Author's Note on the Series: I'm writing ( Read more... )

gleefic, series: big gay team, brittana, santana, sue, brittany, puck

Comments 10

droetker January 10 2011, 13:43:39 UTC

After that chapter my heart belongs to you <3
It's amazing :D It's not the same Puck but that's ok.
I want more!

lennoxave January 11 2011, 17:07:49 UTC

Hee, thanks! Yeah, it's more of a kinder, gentler Puck here, but I feel like this season he's taken sort of a turn towards that, like they're trying to do a bully redemption arc with him, so that's why I wrote him that way. :)

some_stars January 11 2011, 08:24:00 UTC

This is so sweet, omg. And I love that it's Brittany who pushes things and says things she knows will strike a nerve for Santana. SO awesome.

lennoxave January 11 2011, 17:12:21 UTC

D'aww, thank you so much! I think people sometimes forget that Brittany can be a bad-ass mean girl when she wants to be (that scene in "Mattress" when Rachel asks how she knows the glee picture will get defaced and she says something to the effect of "because I'll be the one defacing it," for example), and a lot of being that type of person is knowing what will get under someone else's skin. So of course she can get under Santana. . . . I may mean that in more ways than one, lol. :)

mayireadtoday January 12 2011, 01:12:31 UTC

So interesting and true: "She was there when Brittany needed her to be, but she let her make her own mistakes. Artie's always warning her about things and giving her advice, and it's not one of things she likes about dating him."

I love how you reversed the "sex isn't dating" thing.

Sue is still awesome.

lennoxave January 12 2011, 07:06:36 UTC

Thanks! I feel like those two are never going to be monogamy people, you know? At least in this stage of their lives.

beta_goddess January 13 2011, 23:05:56 UTC

Really good characterization and too many awesome lines to quote here. I'm really enjoying this story. All I ask: could you number your chapters? It makes it easier to keep track so that I know I haven't missed any. Thanks!

lennoxave January 16 2011, 01:15:48 UTC

Thank you so much! And yes, I'll add numbers. I have no idea why I didn't before. *facepalm*

isarn January 27 2011, 12:16:23 UTC

Love it. Really love it. They're soul mates, and you've written them perfectly.

lennoxave January 27 2011, 17:48:41 UTC

Thank you! They really are, aren't they?