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lennelle

Fic: Wind Chimes

Aug 26, 2016 15:41

Title: Wind Chimes
Word Count: 3156
Summary: John and Dean have to identify a body.
Author's Notes: Based on this prompt: I just watched season 1 again, and in the episode 'Benders' I think it was practically Sam's fault that the dad died as he got out, took out the brothers and the father, whatever ( Read more... )

episode tag, dean winchester, hurt!sam, possible character death, the benders, fic, wind chimes, canon divergence, death!fic, season 1, kidnapped, john winchester, sam winchester

Comments 10

quickreaver August 26 2016, 17:08:01 UTC

lennelle August 28 2016, 23:38:51 UTC

;)

carocali August 26 2016, 19:55:00 UTC

That was a super mean way to end this! :D Great use of the prompt!

:D
Caroline

lennelle August 28 2016, 23:41:06 UTC

Thank you so much! It's a little frustrating for me as the writer to end it like that, but it's exactly how I wanted it to end, even if I'm itching a little to write another chapter!
But it's up to you what happened :)

alethiometry August 26 2016, 21:22:38 UTC

what a brutal cliffhanger... with some of the scariest villains from s1, no less!

also: I have to wonder, assuming John already knows all about Azazel's plans at this point, if there's not a small, terrible part of him hoping it is Sam under that sheet - because then at least the demons could never get to him, and Dean wouldn't have to be the one to kill him.........

thank you for sharing this!

lennelle August 28 2016, 23:47:06 UTC

That is a very good thought, I did want John to seem less connected with Sam and maybe that's the reason why. Thanks so much for reading!

madebyme_x August 26 2016, 23:26:28 UTC

Ohhhh what a powerful cliffhanger! I loved the format as you flick from present to past. I loved how Sam hears Dean in his head, and I loved how broken and desperate Dean was, and how you can it hear it in the messages he left for John.

I can't help but wonder what happens, but I like to think that Sam could save himself against the Benders (you really captured that season one horror element too!) Thank you for sharing. Take care :)

lennelle August 28 2016, 23:45:51 UTC

Thank you so much! I really love the darkness of the earlier seasons and I miss it a lot on the show. Wondering is exactly what I wanted the reader to do, this whole story was very experimental for me so I'm glad it's do what I intended.
Thanks so much for reading :)

mentholpixie August 28 2016, 20:52:52 UTC

I choose to believe that the body isn't Sam's and nothing you say will convince me otherwise!

This was seriously creepy. You really captured how horrifying the situation was for everyone involved.

lennelle August 28 2016, 23:42:41 UTC

If you think the body isn't Sam's, then it isn't. But I'll keep how I imagine Sam's fate to myself...
Thank you so much, creepy was just what I was going for!