The Right to Love - Part 13

Jun 22, 2011 16:27


Title: The Right to Love

Spoilers: Takes place after ep 101 (8x09) after Pepa and Silvia have become engaged. This is a sequel to my previous PepSi fanfic, In Love's Defense. My fic follows LHDP up to ep 101 but departs from the show at that point - ep 104 never has and never will exist in this version of Pepa and Silvia’s world.

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fan fic, rating: nc-17, pepa/silvia

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bsofthewest June 23 2011, 00:35:24 UTC
You have no idea how much I was needing some PepSi today. Thank You

“I’m not crazy, Dr. Gonzalez. I’m in love. Truly in love.” Yes, that's our Pepa!

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lenageek June 23 2011, 21:41:40 UTC
You're welcome for the dose of PepSi - happy to give you a refill! :D

Mmm...I love writing about a lovestruck Pepa, even in the midst of crisis.

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bsofthewest June 23 2011, 21:46:33 UTC
You know what, I just realized, I get gleeful when there is a well written PepaySilvia fic update. I just love those two. Thank you for keeping them alive for us.

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lenageek June 23 2011, 21:57:48 UTC
Me too! Sometimes I wonder why I still have the PepSi love still going strong two years after the story ended - and then I realize that it was such a damn well told, acted story that it's hard to fall out of love with the magic of PepSi. I'm happy to keep it alive and to keep the happy endings going. I will have them with this story, trust me!

I'm also trying to eventually write some shorter PepSi fics (with less angst, more humor and more sexy!) that I've had in my head for a while.

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imayfan June 23 2011, 06:37:24 UTC
Pepa finally got to beat the shit out of Trujillo!

loved the the scene with Pepa and the doc talking about true love.

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lenageek June 23 2011, 21:43:51 UTC
Hell to the yeah!! Kickass Pepa! That was actually a very intense scene to write - I was mentally wiped out and needed a massage after finishing that chapter!

I'd actually had the scene with Pepa and the doctor written for weeks, but ended up revising it when I got to Pepa's speech and was pretty happy with the way it came out. Thanks for noticing that bit! :D

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ur5amaj0r June 23 2011, 09:53:35 UTC
Yes! Silvia's safe for now. Hope she'll wake up & get better soon. :)

Am I sick for loving to hear Trujillo's bones cracked by Pepa?
*laughs hysterically* OMG, I am sick!
But I'm not sicker than Trujillo. God, you made him so insane! I like! ;)

167945 = lifeline for Silvia. I might just buy that lottery number! :P

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lenageek June 23 2011, 21:49:01 UTC
Yes! Silvia's safe for now.

Yay! All is good with Silvia...for now...

No, you're not the only one who loved hearing Trujillo suffer - I'd had that scene in my head for months and actually ended writing it a bit more graphically than I'd pictured. You'll see the reason behind his hatred/insanity in the next part.

That's really funny that you mentioned the safe number - I sure as hell wouldn't use it as a lottery number! LOL! Because I was actually spelling the numbers out, I had to rewrite it several times since I realized I was writing 'six seven eight' - and once I read it, I knew that would make a really stupid safe combination - so I had to change it. Haha!

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ur5amaj0r June 24 2011, 03:13:27 UTC
Can't wait to read why he's so insane. ^-^

You'll never know. It might be a winning number. Will let you know if it is.

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jodief1 June 23 2011, 17:27:55 UTC
Excellent, as always. Thanks so much for giving us so much detail - I particularly loved the beachy sexy time, even if it was dreamy sexy time.

BTW, I am a fan of IMAY as well, and have really enjoyed seeing Lena in 300 and Game of Thrones. I'm sure she'll continue doing great work!

*cracking fingers* And now it's time for me to get to work to give you your payback fic. You've fulfilled your end of the bargain, now it's my turn. (LOL - of course, this is just a great excuse to get me writing. No pressure!)

Cheers! and keep up the great work.

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lenageek June 23 2011, 21:53:55 UTC
Excellent, as always. Thanks so much for giving us so much detail

Wow, thanks! :D

The beachy sexy time wasn't even planned but once I started writing the chapter, I wanted to try and start it from an unconventional angle. Whether it was Pepa or Silvia fantasizing/dreaming there, I left that up to interpretation.

No pressure on your fic - tho I can't wait to see what you come up with!

Lena Headey's body of work is made of awesomeness! I'm good friends with the person who runs the Imagine Me and You fan site - with her, I've been fortunate enough to meet Lena several times. Lena's a sweetie and so dang funny and humble at the same time. She rocks. And, embarrassingly enough, she does know about my username - but she doesn't mind. Heh. :D

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bsofthewest June 23 2011, 22:16:27 UTC
Threadjack....I am a Lena Lunatic as well...Your handle is reference to Lena H? Oh, the light bulb goes on! I am loving her work in Game of Thrones.

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lenageek June 23 2011, 22:25:32 UTC
Threadjack - hahahaaaa!!! Never heard that term!

Feel free to jack the thread and talk about Lena any time! Tho I have a confession to make - I have to catch up on most of Game of Thrones! Will catch up before ComicCon and the GoT panel, tho! I've read the first book so I know what happens...

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szairmz June 24 2011, 03:33:45 UTC
That dream, I hope you will materialize it when everything is over.
I don't know why, but I find intimacy in public an addictive adrenaline high.
And beaches seem to top the list to fulfill that.
On another note, I am so proud of Pepa.
Amazing, even in her rage, she still managed to maintain her poise.
If I were her, I would have done so much worse to T-ass.

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lenageek June 27 2011, 15:37:16 UTC
Hola szairmz!

That dream, I hope you will materialize it when everything is over.

I will, in a way. I have a very nice last 'shot' or vision in my head for the ending. I do hope it comes out well when I finally get to it. Yes, there will be much sexy time. In a bed as big as a fútbol stadium. :)

I keep thinking that I should have had Pepa do something worse/more to Trujillo based on some of the comments I've been getting! She shoulda made him suffer more! :p

But it's not the last we'll see of those pricks from IA in this story...

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