The Right to Love - Part 11

May 31, 2011 12:47


Title: The Right to Love

Spoilers: Takes place after ep 101 (8x09) after Pepa and Silvia have become engaged. This is a sequel to my previous PepSi fanfic, In Love’s Defense. My fic follows LHDP up to ep 101 but departs from the show at that point - ep 104 never has and never will exist in this version of Pepa and Silvia’s world.

Rating: R for ( Read more... )

fan fic, pepa/silvia

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bsofthewest May 31 2011, 21:57:57 UTC
Those two need to be mysteriously shot in a dark ally, preferably while Pepa has a good alibi.

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lenageek May 31 2011, 22:48:03 UTC
Ooh, I hadn't thought of that one! :D Don't worry, those two will get what's coming to them. But they're not through with tormenting PepSi - not by a long shot.

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reiimy97 June 1 2011, 03:08:19 UTC
I think I'm going to have a nervous breakdown after reading this chapter LOL. But I trust you that this stories have a happy ending. Thank you and I can't wait for your next update.

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lenageek June 1 2011, 15:36:08 UTC
Lol - no nervous breakdowns, please! :O But yes, my stories do have happy endings. I'm just a big fan of a lot of angst in between! Thanks for reading and commenting again. :D

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imayfan June 1 2011, 05:25:12 UTC
great cliffhanger! does Pepa get to punch Trujillo soon?

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lenageek June 1 2011, 15:37:03 UTC
Heh - she'll do a lot more than punch him...eventually!

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thank you!! <3 suying87 June 1 2011, 13:11:46 UTC
awesome chapter! but another cliffy?!? *inhale deeply* you're rite.. thank God i didnt read your fics earlier.. glad i could finish in love's defense all at once and only need to wait on this ( ... )

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Re: thank you!! <3 lenageek June 1 2011, 15:43:31 UTC
awesome chapter! but another cliffy?!?

Sorry about that! I have a few more coming - be warned!

I actually wrote In Love's Defense a lot faster than I'm writing this fic, so hopefully those cliffhangers weren't as bad if you were reading as I was writing. I've got my muse back now, so now that I'm into the cliffhanger parts of this story, I hope I won't keep folks waiting so long!

Thank god the medical stuff is somewhat accurate! I winced and said "oh shit!" when I read you were getting your medical degree (which is awesome, by the way!) since that means someone's reading this who knows what they're talking about! Certainly not everything I'll write about will be accurate since I have no knowledge and I'm fictionalizing some parts, but I try. I admit my research consists of a lot of Google searching! And if I get stuff wrong, I appreciate any feedback!

Thanks so much for taking the time to read my fics - I'm still stunned that anyone does! :D And your comments are in no way rubbish - they do help me a great deal!

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pepsilove64 June 1 2011, 17:03:55 UTC
Thanks for the awesome update!
Boy, I hate Trujillo!
Can't wait for more:}

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lenageek June 1 2011, 21:13:06 UTC
You're welcome!

I'm not a fan of Trujillo either! He was such an asshole in the show, so he was an easy pick to expand on and make him more of an asshole for my fan fic purposes! :D

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