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lenageek

The Right to Love - Part 9

May 13, 2011 13:17

Title: The Right to Love

Spoilers: Takes place after ep 101 (8x09) after Pepa and Silvia have become engaged. This is a sequel to my previous PepSi fanfic, In Love's Defense. My fic follows LHDP up to ep 101 but departs from the show at that point - ep 104 never has and never will exist in this version of Pepa and Silvia’s world.

Rating: NC-17. Sorry ( Read more... )

fan fic, rating: nc-17, pepa/silvia

Comments 24

szairmz May 16 2011, 03:22:11 UTC

I've missed you!!!
But I'm glad you came back with a vengeance.
This update is really twisted.
I can literally taste the storm brewing just around the corner.
PMS!!!!

lenageek May 17 2011, 02:13:34 UTC

Hola szairmz - I've been gone so long, I'm surprised anyone noticed! :p But thank you for reading. Yes, indeed, the storm is coming! Hope I can give it justice when I write it - I've had it in my head for at least a year!

swiftlyreloaded May 16 2011, 17:47:16 UTC

this was such a FANTASTIC update WOW! I can feel it through the words a storm is a coming. Looking forward to the next installment & GREAT job!

lenageek May 17 2011, 02:14:38 UTC

Hola swifty! :D It makes me smile to see a few usernames around here that I haven't in a while. Working on the next installment now - it'd better take no where near as long as this last one!

girlechick May 16 2011, 19:42:07 UTC

Awesome chapter LG!! So nice to see you back writing again.
Thank you so much for keeping PepSi alive! :)

lenageek May 17 2011, 02:15:59 UTC

Yay!!! My beezer chica! I think I just about yelled that when I saw your username! How's uni? Still killing ya? ;p Don't worry, you'll have smarter brain cells at the end of it!

I still love keeping PepSi alive, even if it's just for me. But it's gratifying that you're still reading - thanks so much, chica! :D Besos!

girlechick May 17 2011, 17:12:06 UTC

Well hello there! :D
Uni's going great. Another 2 weeks to go and I'm outta there. Mind you, My class has to organise an exhibition for the uni, which isn't so beezer. A lot of work still needs to be done.

Enough about me, How are things with you? How's Nani? :)

lenageek May 17 2011, 19:01:24 UTC

Hello! :D

That's great - in a few weeks you'll be a bonafide graduate! Congrats!

I'm good. Nani's naughty, but what else is new? Just met my two month old nephew since my sister lives out of the state - so cute! Am enjoying family time but it's gone by way to fast. They fly home tomorrow.

Am enjoying writing again. Trying to get through the next part, which is kinda tricky since it's a pivotal point in the action.

cal_ol May 24 2011, 20:29:19 UTC

Yeey! First time to comment on your story, I just was too lazy to create an account, but I finnaly did! :) It's a great story, can't wait for a new chapter. Just want to say a little thing, my first lenguage is spanish and you're wrong when you write "cAjones" because it's "cOjones". Cajones means drawers.

lenageek May 24 2011, 21:37:25 UTC

Hello cal_ol - thanks so much for taking the time to comment! And my apologies for my incredibly bad Spanish! I've misspelled 'cojones' in the past - thank you for catching my mistake. I went back and fixed it! :D

ur5amaj0r June 23 2011, 06:49:04 UTC

Ugh... I'm a bad reader...
Just went to the forum and found out you've updated. And a lot too! *clap hands* 5 parts!! Like WOW!!! *eyes bulged*

And after reading this, god, I need a massage. Head, shoulders, body, legs... Ugh... And I'm not greedy, just a massage. No need the cuddling at the end of it... Although that would be nice too... Ugh...

Ok, I'll stop rambling and go read the following parts. Ciao! ;)

lenageek June 23 2011, 18:29:04 UTC

Hola ur5amajor! Thanks for the birthday wishes! I had a great bday with a little surprise party from friends since my family lives out of state. And I admit I keep buying myself bday presents on ebay - I say, celebrate the whole month! :D

Thanks for taking the time to read and catch up - wowzers! I was actually up very late and was reading your comments as they came in - muchas gracias!

You're not the only one who needs a massage. Especially after finishing part 13, which was quite intense to write - man, my shoulders were sore! It's all the keyboard action! ;p

ur5amaj0r June 24 2011, 02:12:00 UTC

Glad you had a great bday and spoiling yourself silly buying presents for yourself! ;)

You're welcome! I'm a fan of your fics so you can be sure I'll always read & comment no matter how busy I am. :) Right now my writing muse ain't cooperating with me, I'm stuck at the tarada2's Silvia's POV fic challenge. Hopefully I'll finish that soon so that I could write a new one that's been swimming in my brain for so long now. :D