The Right to Love - Part 5

[lenageek]

Title: The Right to Love

Spoilers: Takes place after ep 101 (8x09) after Pepa and Silvia have become engaged. This is a sequel to my previous PepSi fanfic, In Love’s Defense. My fic follows LHDP up to ep 101 but departs from the show at that point - ep 104 never has and never will exist in this version of Pepa and Silvia’s world.

Rating: NC-17. I

Comments

Re: worth waiting!!!!

[lenageek]

Hi pepsibettina_18! I love your username - what a great combo of fandoms! :D

I hope to crank out the next chapter soon - and by that, I mean in a matter of a week, certainly not months!

Fantastic!!!!

[kbwaahoo]

Wow, just wow ! Loved reading this! Talk about hot passion with these two lovebirds! I just melted into the story!! I never wanted it to end!!!!!
Thank you thank you! Great job!!!!!
So looking forward to more soon ;)

Re: Fantastic!!!!

[lenageek]

Hey kbwaahoo - thanks for the comment and taking time to read! Writing the passion is the tricky part for me, so I'm glad you enjoyed! I'm about to put the girls through the wringer though a case they'll come up against at the precinct, but there will be more sexy time with them eventually! ;D

Re: Fantastic!!!!

[kbwaahoo]

I would have never guessed it was tricky for ya cuz u nailed it!! :)
Putting them through the ringer should be fun! Can't wait! You're talented!!!
:) and here I was gonna beg for more if needed! ;)

Re: Fantastic!!!!

[lenageek]

Heh - writing a love scene is hard for me since I don't want to make it sound cliche or overly sappy.

But putting the girls through the wringer will be fun - I'm trying to think of some dastardly things to do to them! ;D

[pantherwalks]

Hi, Lena. Nice to see you back. Definitely miss you and your fic. Great update as always. :)

I hope Pepa and Silvia will get through this, especially Silvia. And it's not impossible cause they have each other.

Thanks! And can't wait for the next chap. xD

[lenageek]

Hey pantherwalks, nice to see you! Thanks for reading - with the comm so quiet, I was wondering if anyone would.

Yeah, PepSi is all good right now. But I'm gonna love coming up with other stuff to rock their world and not in a good way! But how can they not be fine when they keep having sexy time! :p

[lenageek]

You found your muse!

Yee haw!! I did! Now, if I can just find my flash drive (which has my latest story files on it) which is lost somewhere in my house - I can continue! Bugs the hell outta me when I don't know where something is...

I haven't read this (or the next chapter) yet b/c I'm not sure where I left off in this story

Well, why the heck not?? Just kidding, k! Let me know what you think once you get a chance to read - I'm always interested in your take on things since you yourself have such fantastic wit as a writer.

As for holding onto the muse - I think it's like that old saying of trying to hold a tiger by the tail! :O

Good smut is always appreciated!

[ur5amaj0r]

And good is not a good enough word to descibe the smut you've wrote. Any better word than good? ;)

I'm very late at commenting cause I just got back to reading fics. And saw that many chapters of this fic has been posted! So loving you right now. <3

*scoot off to read the next chapter*

Re: Good smut is always appreciated!

[lenageek]

And good is not a good enough word to descibe the smut you've wrote. Any better word than good? ;)

Lol, thanks for saying that! I acutally find smut incredibly hard to write! Yours is so incredibly descriptive and well done - I must catch up on the latest chapters of your story!